rate_review Reviews

Hi TRH,  I'm enjoying 'My Alpha' story very very much and I wanted to let you know.  It's terrific.  I'm on chp14.

Before writing comment, I read previous reviews.  And now I feel a stronger need to comment.  I'm sure I'll comment again later after reading more. 

I love the story, your charachters, the plot is interesting and has enough suspense and tension building regarding the future for the wolves.  I have two comments.

First, I didn't like reading the post  "From ANON - harumph on September 06, 2014"  about the courting period for the couple as it focused on negative but I understand the point being made.  I can see that this part of the story has potential to play a stronger part of the story and charachter development of Brice and Alec.  If the story development works well, it will describe the process of deepening and strengthing the emotional attrraction, respect, admiration, desire, and love aspect of the couple.  The reader gets more information to understand their feelings/emotions for each other as they change and grow -- such as What changed, why did it change, how much did it change, and what was the resulting feeling/emotion.

Second, Brice and Alec are perfect.  I especially like that when in private Alec allows his dominant side to emerge and I like that Brice allows himself to enjoy it.  In RL strong relationships, the use of power can move fluidly between partners as needed and as part of building and maintaining strong emotional and romantic bonds and mutual respect.  YEA!  And strong bonds will be evident during more difficult challenges (the war to come).  In this story, it shows how Alec is channeling his Alpha nature in a positive direction.

c'est tout fini

Give me.  Give me more. more. MORE.  Am just hanging here waiting.  :)  I hope RL is going ok so you'll feel like doing some writing.  Merci

 

I love this story, I hope you keep going.

Omg I hope you will continue this wonderful story.

This is a nice story and it was going good till the chapter of Faith. You gave yourself an entire month of possible romance to insert and you completley wasted it. No courtship behavior whatsoever except for sleeping together in the same bed. A whole month and what did they do nothing. Now we have a chapter in Faith where Alec is questioning and doubting and sounding so unsure and frankly silly. And you know why because what courting what courting? About a jillion different scenarios could have played out but the only thing you wrote about was Alec and his fighting/teaching techniques. A whole month of romance and sexual tension down the drain. Can't believe it. The whole dating experience gone. Now there will be a mating and later a mpreg. I personally have lost interest. This fic is way more battle heavy than about the romance so I am abandoning this read.

I loved it. please continue this. both are so strong and beautiful, I like that Alec is too dominant in the sex, so is much exciting. I enjoy so much when they have Sex and you think, who will do the dominant part ? This is so much more interesting. Please don't abandon this.

Argh.... the story was going good until the sex scenes where Alec kinda fucked Brice, why, why must that be, why can't Brice be the only dominate? Now I'm sad and feeling disinterested. Any who, I had so much fun reading this story, it was sad and had beautiful details and description, it just wasn't my cup of tea.

I've been waiting for an update for over a year now but sadly it seems you've abandoned this story. Which I really hope wouldn't be the case as I really enjoyed this story. Still I've waited for updates longer and will continue to do so for this one as well, so I hope you'll continue this story sometime this year maybe? And I still stand behind what I wrote in the last review from last year.

It was ok till you had Alec being the dominate one then that fucked up the whole story! I didn't even finish the chapter none less the story because of that!

i really really like this story and i really hope that there i more to come...and sooooooon!!!!! :)