rate_review Reviews

must say you have outdone yourself with this one. my hat is off to you. loved it

Hi Laevi! I hope you get that vacation that you mentioned because you really deserve it. I don't think I've read this story before ~~ slaps myself on the head for missing it ~~ and I really liked it. It was very well written and thought out. I loved the whole time travel concept it was very cool. I had seen a movie once called "Somewhere in Time" with Christopher Reeve (Superman) and it involved traveling back in time. Congrats on another very erotic and entertaining story.

I am in love this story. It breaks my heart that it's abandoned.

oh i love this story i made me smile. i was literally saying finish the freaking machine i wanna go

Not to be too cranky, but it would be really awesome if you'd finish a story before losing interest and flitting off to a new one. Seems to be a trend (I *had* several of your stories as faves) and I guess I'll quit checking in. It's very sad and frustrating to get sucked into an interesting and well-written fiction, only to have it abandoned...with no resolution...are we really all this ADHD? You were updating this story practically daily, which was awesome, and had just gotten to a pivotal part, coming to the future. I was really psyched & now it's been over a month since it was updated & you're going great guns on a brand new story. Did you run out of plot? Lose inspiration? Get bored? You could at least write a crappy "and they lived happily ever after in any time they desired" to give the story closure.

Your disappointed reader,
Rae

Damn! A whole slew of updates. I'm honored and glad you thought my input about Julian's name was useful.
This story is enjoyable; I am anxious to see how the butterfly effect has changed the present.
Just what kind of surprises do you have in store for your readers Laevi?

Until Then.
No Cream. no Love.
~WR

Lovely chapter Laevi. I love how well Frederick and Charles are taking to everything. Julian and Frederick jumped right into the porn! Hilarious. Simon and Charles seem to make a formidable pair. With Charles intelligence and and Simon's scientific genius, they could accomplish so much. If this happened in real life, they would probably make a big impact on the world. I am sure Charle's mind will boggle when he sees all the building supplies and tools that are available in the modern world. I found one small typo when Frederick is in the bathtub with Julian:

He pulled his head away to catch some air. “Don’t tough me!” he warned, gasping. “I don’t want t to be over quickly!”

Wonderful. Charles can design and make authentic 18th century furniture. It is good that Julian is rich - Fredrick can get his own iphone among other things.

and now the plot thickens!! dun dun dun...
i can't wait to see what's happened, what's changed, its so exciting. i can't wait for the next chapter.

Glad everyone made it through safely. Now, what is changing & why?!?
Guessing it's b/c of Charles & his furniture making skills...here's to hoping the changes aren't massive.

This story feels like a good episode of Sliders. Tweak one thing & see how massively the world changes! ^_^ Keep up the good work!