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August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know I am enjoying this story so far, and really hope there will be more to come.
That scene in the kitchen was really hot, and I am very curious to see what happens with these two.
Also, curious about Logan's past: "when your older your gonna thank me for this. I'm giving you a courtasy I wasn't given"
That scene in the kitchen was really hot, and I am very curious to see what happens with these two.
Also, curious about Logan's past: "when your older your gonna thank me for this. I'm giving you a courtasy I wasn't given"
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August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
He's in the kitchette making dinner.
Long pinao fingers wrapped around a long knife, slicing onions with presicion my mom would envy.
Yeah, that sounds excatly like my future wife(a straight girl can have a male straight wife.I would totally push on for that kind of a law;))
Anyway that last sentence in this chapter(2) is really groundbreaking.
I'm glad Logan is thinking with his head. Hell I'd make him wait for me(2 years, hell I waited that long myself it's payback time!)
the little brat. BUt what the hell, he doesn't want a guy who faints when he kisses him?!I get the facial hair thing(well, it kinda makes the age difference obvious and you a pedobear with a child that hadn't come from your loins ouch!) but even then some guys don't have it at all no matter how old( higher percentage of omething they ate*ahrugs*) and man I'd like him to swoon ..a little))
Logan really needs to draw a line and stay behind it. That was a low blow, entering a hormonal teenager's personal space to tease him. He deserves to be butraped a.s.a.p.
Hahahhahahaha
Long pinao fingers wrapped around a long knife, slicing onions with presicion my mom would envy.
Yeah, that sounds excatly like my future wife(a straight girl can have a male straight wife.I would totally push on for that kind of a law;))
Anyway that last sentence in this chapter(2) is really groundbreaking.
I'm glad Logan is thinking with his head. Hell I'd make him wait for me(2 years, hell I waited that long myself it's payback time!)
the little brat. BUt what the hell, he doesn't want a guy who faints when he kisses him?!I get the facial hair thing(well, it kinda makes the age difference obvious and you a pedobear with a child that hadn't come from your loins ouch!) but even then some guys don't have it at all no matter how old( higher percentage of omething they ate*ahrugs*) and man I'd like him to swoon ..a little))
Logan really needs to draw a line and stay behind it. That was a low blow, entering a hormonal teenager's personal space to tease him. He deserves to be butraped a.s.a.p.
Hahahhahahaha
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August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, the beginning of the chapter was hysterical! Love the neighbor; he's too funny! A puppy! Haha And then Ben's looking all around for the puppy! hahaha
But the end, wow, Logan really noticed Ben this whole time. But what was that part about two years ago; I didn't quite follow that part.
So, from what I gather, Logan IS interested in Ben, but thinks Ben's too young. And I'm also assuming that something happened to Logan when he was 16, abuse?
Anyway, awesome chapter, and again, if you want me to clean up these last two chapters, let me know! It'll actually be better if readers will be reading it for the first time.
But the end, wow, Logan really noticed Ben this whole time. But what was that part about two years ago; I didn't quite follow that part.
So, from what I gather, Logan IS interested in Ben, but thinks Ben's too young. And I'm also assuming that something happened to Logan when he was 16, abuse?
Anyway, awesome chapter, and again, if you want me to clean up these last two chapters, let me know! It'll actually be better if readers will be reading it for the first time.