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by Lilmissgg

person anon
schedule September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!!! Please continue soon! I wanna know what Ben will say next....
and wow they've kissed already!! can't wait for more between those two.
hope you update soon : ) can't wait!!
person reid
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
In logan pov. i don't know i think you should continue with ben's point on the matter
i'm loving it keep wtiting please the cliffy is killing me.
S
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
An ulcer is the least of my worries. OMG, hysterical! And you might get beyond that page if you hold the book the right way. Shit, that was funny!


Wait, "Rocky" is a classic???????

It would be interesting to read things from Logan's pov.

Anyway, great chapter; I can't see how Ben and Logan can continue this way with Ben avoiding any contact with Logan. I think eventually Logan's gonna blow. Of course now that he sees Mark's hand on Ben's crotch, I think he's gonna blow a gasket! lol

So, please try again with the email and I'm really sorry about the other two times. Lisa
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and LOVE IT! Very cute. I like the characters. Can't wait to find out what hapened in Logan's past, what will happen during the holiday, and what the brother will think when he comes back and finds out about the relationship. I'll be checking often for updates. Thanks for the wonderful story.
person puorla
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love love love
person Solz
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please do continue with the story... i like it!
person MayoRose
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:D well im very happy to see you updated!! i was getting a little impatient! hahahah! but i really enjoyed it! and i think a chapter in Logan's pov would be equally as interesting! Something i would like to see! Loved this chapter! keep doing a great job!
person eatmorefish
schedule September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhh you're evil!!!! haha can't wait for more this is really good/funny XD!
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AWW why don't you have more reviews! This is cute tho I don't usually read stories with minors, I would l love to see what happens next! that was just so cruel = ( mean logan
person MayoRose
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow i just read the two chapters you have posted! i am really intrigues with this!! im LOVING it! i hope this motivates you to write soon and update! hahaha This is starting out as a great story! :D