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September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. I can't wait to read more.
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September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it...can't wait to see more!
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September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*points last line* grrrrr *pouts* cliffhanger.... >_
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September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
what a cliffhanger!!! hahahaha! i havent been on aff for awhile sorry for the late review! again thannks for the update! i always look forward to your work! I <3 Ben!! hes so adorable to me!! :D
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September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
They finally kissed OMG. Love the story and was so happy to see it updated. Please keep up the good work and update soon. :)
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September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I just ran across your story. Enjoy the interaction, you have a way of doing dialog and action at the same time that makes you feel like you're watching it in real time rather than reading an account! Really curious how Ben is going to answer that last questions! ~River Girl
I just ran across your story. Enjoy the interaction, you have a way of doing dialog and action at the same time that makes you feel like you're watching it in real time rather than reading an account! Really curious how Ben is going to answer that last questions! ~River Girl
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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. Good cliffhanger, although brutal to us. I hope that means you are going to update relatively soon.
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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope you bruise nicely;)
Man, I'm worried about he kid.That last qustion sounds menacing.
Man, I'm worried about he kid.That last qustion sounds menacing.
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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooh a little cliff hanger >:D please don`t keep us in suspense! Can`t wait for the next chapter
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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ha! So, Logan's showing his true colors, it seems! Boy was HE jealous when he saw Mark there!
It'll be interesting to hear Ben explain what Mark's hand was doing "down there"!
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
It'll be interesting to hear Ben explain what Mark's hand was doing "down there"!
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!