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oh and forgot to say loooove your smex scence!!

Having just read your smex, i say go for both. I love a good plot with awesome smex. so keep that combo coming and i will keep reading and rating.

No they can't keep it up, they're going down in flames!!

loved this chapter too....the way you write Ben is so realistic...like the reader feels their heart pounding right along with Ben. Anyways i think your writing is original and it feels i can never really completely guess what's gonna come out of any of your character's mouths....btw i DID enjoy the smexxy chapter!
Can't wait for more!

Long, slim fingers, with a lone plain silver band on his middle finger. They had such elegance and grace. I wanted to touch them. No, I wanted them to touch me. Everywhere.
And that's how my fantasies of Logan started. Each time with a different body part. Although his hands always remained the star attraction.

HWT;HAWT goodiness just never stops with this ficlet of yours:)

But th ending is so cute, speaking as a person that had its ass kicked/spanked etc. every time Nintendo was used( I always loose, wicked tongues would say on purpouse to receive "punishment" but I say eeerrr you're wrong.There's just something on ppl's faces when they think they won that makes me smile.Of course I like to win too, I can live with being Mario loser( never saved the princess, I would rather save Luigi he seemed more pathetic then her.She was irritatng to me..) but there are games I don't want to end up hanging either;))

Ok, so Ben's gotta be dying to find out exactly why everything is so complicated for Logan. And so am I!

Great chapter; poor, poor Ben, didn't realize he had no reason to apologize!

Can't wait for the next update! :)

Oh, and btw: I think the reason a lot of readers don't comment on the smex part is because they're computers combusted from all the heat! ahahhaha Or they're just embarrassed! hahahah, yeah, right! It was a great scene tho, especially for me, b/c I got to read it twice! lol :)

"You think they can keep it up? ;)"
Hum, unless I missed the memo about hell freezing... Not a chance! XDDDD And I love them for it. :D

OMG!
I don't know how yu did it.
It's ufcking cold in my room cause I can't afford heating, but while I was reading it was fucking hot.
There was actually heat coming up from my belly to my mouth.
You didi good.More then good.
Thanks.

It was so sad to read about Logan and his abuse when he was younger. Is that why he's been holding Ben off and trying his best to make Ben feel like he doesn't like him?

Logan was trying to protect Ben from him. Logan thought his anger and aggression would come thru if he was with Ben, right?

Well, I see he couldn't hold out any longer. haha Hopefully when Ben wakes up he won't freak!