rate_review Reviews

OMG! *mouth drops to the floor*
"USE ME", did he just say that. Oh, you're such a wicked, wicked writer;)

aww man that WAS short...but thank you nonetheless :).
as for the end of the chapter...umm "use me"???? is that what i think it means??????? XD or am i just being a pervert.....super excited for the next chapter!!!!!!!!

Oh no he didn't! I am so enamored with this story that it's probably not healthy. I am looking forward to the next chapter with a telescope.

oh my god. absolutly LOVED it. Please you have to write another chapter soon. It'll be interesting to see how he acts when he's jealous. and you know what, with this bimbo all over logan i feel that logan needs to be jealous too. We need another scene like the one with mark, or maybe a new guy. Logan is really really hot when he's jealous. With the way logan is pushing ben away, a little jealousy will do him some good. He'll be able to see that he doesn't want ben to be with anyone else. oooo, my mind is running wild with fanfiction ideas for your fanfiction. hehehe. Please please please update soon.

NEXT TIME BETTER BE LIKE TODAY I DEMAND DEMAND I SAY THAT U UPDATE THIS LIKE NOW

i was all smiles when i was reading the chapter until i got to the end...then i was like "Nuh-uh. Bitch, please" lol

Glad to see these two getting along better! lol Loved the banter in the arcade.

Loved the fact that Ben can really get to Logan and he really loves this fact too! lol

But who the hell is the bitch? I know Ben's thinking the same thing.

Great chapter; can't wait for the next one! :)

I get a bit out of patience with these two, haha.
Nice chapter, a bit short though...:)

Spotted:))
I'm glad I left a trace.
Hope this gf makes someone jelaous enough to jump LOgan.Fullstop.

haha love how you explained taking the piss,thats very true.love this story so much!keep going!great job xx