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August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You do a good job of making the story suspenseful and amusing at the same time. I am chewing at the bit for them to find Emery. I don't want those bastards to have their way with him.
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August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Kir better do something fast or he and Emery will be toast. I hope he has some useful skills that he can use to save the day! If anyone is doing Emery, it should be Kir and Ari.
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August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AAAAH! I can't bear the thought of Emery and Kir being kidnapped and possibly worse. They should stay together at all times. I hope you and your co-writer kiss and make up because this story is so wonderful. I hope they will get the hell out of that crazy town.
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August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh evil cliff hanger!! I'm dying for the next chapter already. Love this fic so much fun to read
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August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Even though Kir is a bit tactless I think he is a fun character and it will be fun watching him develop. I want to see him change Ari and Emery's mind as far as his worth.
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August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how kir became a thief, does he thinks he's like robin hood & is stealing for the good of the people?
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August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! They found the first artifact and Kir managed to sleep with Ari. Love their sex scene. I love Kir more with each chapter. I hope he will be able to keep their affair under wraps.
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August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yaay for the update! Poor Kir is being dissed from the right and the left. Plus he seems to be falling for Ari. They should appreciate him more since he was the one chosen to actually find the artifacts. Boo to Ari for bringing that girl to the room and kicking Kir out. I hope she doesn't steal all his stuff. I can't wait for the next chapter to this. I love the story.
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August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really great!!! Can't wait for the next part!!!
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August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter, I love the story. Ari and Kir remind me of Shrek and Donkey (if you have seen any of the movies). Too bad that Kir was booted out of the room.