rate_review Reviews

I sooo did not expect like half of what happened but I did enjoy the story.

Really well thought out mystery and I loved the little extra of the talents. They're subtle not like you've got guys flying around or in the case of Christian being able to see all kinds of details and information. I guess I like that they're not overdone it's something useful but merely a tool to help not something that makes life so easy that you don't even have to work. Plus you managed to make the investigation as interesting as the guys and their relationship, it didn't feel like you were using it as an excuse just to get them into bed together :)

I also really liked the epilogue not just because we got to see that they had made a life for themselves but also the fact that you made a point of showing just how hard and long they had to work to start to recover from what had happened to them. I've always had a problem with stories where within days of being tortured/raped/whatever people seem perfectly fine to be moving on with no long term effects.

Anywho I loved the story, it's always nice to find a really good mystery there aren't nearly enough :) I can't wait to see what you write next ^_^

Very interesting detective story. It was nice to have a happy ending too. Loved the characters, and the story line as well. A few spelling errors but nothing that really took away from the story so no big issue there. It was a wonderful read. Thank you for sharing it. Take care.

littleolmee

Wow, awesome story! The plot and characters, all very well done.

I'm looking forward to future works!