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It's his therapist, isn't it? The devil he's suppose to avoid is going to be his therapist! Well I'm really liking this, and I love your writin style, it's very smooth and it flows. Update soon, I can't wait to see what happens! =)

Hahahaha I may be fruity, but I'm not that fruity! One of the best lines ever! Altho I have read this line before. Sorry.

Also, Johnny and his until I'd gone crazy yesterday and I went crazy yesterday as he tries to explain to the shrink why he's there. Too funny!


But wait! Why didn't Johnny grill the doctor and ask him for a diagnosis? Why didn't he ask what kind of doctor the other doctor is?

Oh, btw, referal is referral. There were a few other typos, words that should have ended with ed. Just in case you wanted to go back and fix it; some authors do that. No biggie tho.

Good chapter, looking forward to the next one!

Oh! I like that neighbor!! He seems like a cutie! =] And it wasn't the therapist....maybe it's the guy he's being refered to? Hmmm? Is it? You've really got me thinking with this story, so please continue! =D