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AAAAH! OH MY GOD I fucking love you! I was like ‘talking cat’ that sound weird and maybe not my kind of kinky. Ends up cranky talking cat=best thing ever.

Lonnie stood up, his tail flickering, and sighed. “Well, fuck.” he muttered. “This is awkward.”

Ah ha ha ha ha! Your writing is very witty and has a sparseness to it that is really working like some kind of sci-fi detective novel.

Johnny has the ever-charming Alice in Wonderland syndrome. Shit just keeps getting weirder and he just keeps trying to logic it out or ignore it. I sort of always fall for that in a person. I’m also really liking Murphy and the hopeless romantic in me needs them to work out (Plus the smut is yum)
He’s an artist right? So surely he is opened minded enough to deal with a talking kitty, no?

Also did you say what city their living in? I think of the geography as like another character to a story so I like to picture it in my head.
Anyway, I will for sure keeping an eye on this story and will write more reviews!

OMG, what a fucking great chapter!!! But first I wanted to say, you don't have to thank me and if I'm annoying you w/my spelling comments, just let me know. I can't help it; it's the editor in me. I find spelling errors everywhere, on school bus signs, in Burlington, on their big metal sale signs, believe it or not! I point it out to the workers and it drives my kids nuts! lol So tell me to stop if I'm getting annoying! Btw: this chapter I didn't find any errors!

Anyway on to the review: what a fucking amazing chapter!!!! And we're not even talking about the sex! hahah I can't believe Murphy can hear Lonnie; I thought it was only Johnny who could hear Lonnie! Jeez, how's Johnny gonna explain this one?????

But getting back to the sex: boy, you certainly can write your smut, can't you?????? lol

OOHHH, I forgot: my favorite line in this chapter was "Well fuck, this is awkward", says the talking cat!!!! Hahahha I was hysterical!!!!

This is an awesome story so far. I am just at the end of chapter 2 and I am already hooked. I am so excited to see some new chapters.

Oh fuck, is that the devil? OMG, how did he know Johnny's name? Oh shit! Now they can't have sex, god damn! lol

Oh, btw: interuptions has two "r"'s: interruption.

I loved the line in the beginning: Murphy was a welcome respite from all of my newfound insanity! Very funny!

Ok, I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon please!!!

Boy, now I'm really confused. So this Deacon guy is the same as Johnny? But he travels in and out of universes?

He seems like a good guy. And what's with the shrink? Is she one of them?

Wow, this story is getting better and better. I'm looking foward to the next update!

Well, I know what he should do; start thinking about what he's gonna wear on his "date" with Murphy!!!! lol

A homophobic house cat! hhahahah too funny!

I can't wait until he has his appt. w/the OTHER shrink; wonder what he's gonna say to him??? Or her....

Ok.....maybe it is the neighbor! This is killing me, I want to know! And I absolutley looooooove Lonnie! He's great! =]
Oh, and you missed a the. When it said 'Then I clean up after insufferable...' It needs to be the insufferable.....just thought you should be aware. Update soon, please!

Awww, I love Lonnie too!

I also love Murphy; boy, what a kiss, right?

So, that motorcycle dude was an ass. What the fuck was he doing at the apt.? And how did Lonnie know it was him? Does he also have X-ray vision? lol That guy better not be you-know-who!

Ok, usually I don't go for the talking animal stories, but I thought I'd try this one out. I laughed most of the chapter! I love the cat! He's too funny! And poor Johnn, calling his insurance company for a list of therapists! hahah Oh, did he ever think that they could have emailed the list to him? Woulda been quicker!

Anyway, great job, looking forward to the next chapter!