rate_review Reviews

Gah! I don't remember if I reviewed this or not! T-T But this is the third time I've read this chapter, just to keep my memory refreshed. T-T I really do love it.

See this goes to show if you’re reversing a spell/having a naked orgy in your apartment and you’re not going to invite the guy you’re bonking in your apartment complex you should probably lock the door.

Also, in a similar train of thought, if you’re Murphy and the last time you walked into dude bro’s apartment you interrupted some one on one time with his talking cat—maybe you should learn to knock first.

Cupcakes do not make up for a poor learning curve.

Deacon is failing to charm me thus far…unless he is willing to hook-up with Lonnie. Then I will re-think my feelings for him.

This story has my interest. Murph must be quite miffed walking in on what probably looks like an orgy. He must be quite suspisios.
“Nothing in(is?) inherently evil, Lonnie.

Shit! What just happened? Lonnie became human (sounds dreamy, btw), Deacon has killed hundreds of what, people? And why? This story keeps getting better and better. I know I've said that before, but it's just great! Johnny does need to apologize to Murphy, man, I felt so bad when he just dropped the plate and slammed the door. He probably thought Johnny was having some kind of orgy or something! lol

Wow. The story is brilliant. I hope Stella will be able to help poor Lonnie even though I love having a talking cat. I wonder if Murphy will be able to handle all the excitement. Good job on making this story so interesting and funny at the same time.

my god, this is some bat crazy twisted shit. write more. I like the pov you're using(first person) It was specially captivating in the first two chapters-Do not change it.

Haha, now take off your clothes! Shit! I can't wait to see Johnny's reaction to that! Omg. I was thinking: once Lonnie becomes Lawrence again, maybe HE'S the devil?

OMG, can't wait for the next update!

The name calling between Lonnie and Johnny in chapter 3 gets the award for most hilarious scene ever.

Poor Murphy. I think he's gotta step up a bit if he's really interested. Seems a little passive. I mean Johnny has talking cats and time travel to worry about and stuff so he's got a lot on his mind! Nice update!

Had to do some catch up! OMG, Lonnie is hysterical!!!! "Look, if you're not going to be gay for that guy, then can I be?" I was falling off my stool!!!!!

So, new characters! Witches and stuff, so interesting. I wonder what Lonnie will look like once he becomes human. And I thought Murphy took to Lonnie's talking rather well! hahah

Ok, on to Zeke and Crane!