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by FreeFlyer

person Celery22
schedule August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh... Most excellent. I am filled with a warm fuzzy feeling of contentment over this chapter. So very nice...
schedule August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, she's bad-ass now. ;D I loved the vision she had about her parents -- her mother seems like a fiery, hehe pun, lady but I like that she's protective over her child. I'm sad that Angela still remembers Tenshi but no one else does. That sucks. :( I have to admit, even though Melissa is nice, I don't like that she's taking Angela's place because Tenshi and Angela are currently split apart. It's not fair. /= But I did like the line Tenshi said to Melissa about getting her to bed and then undressing her. XD Scandalous! Update soon!
person Celery22
schedule August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, a protagonist who actually draws conclusions, and so well too! I like hiw Tenshi just plain gets it, everything, that is. Gimme more Saige, I can't get enough of this!
schedule August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that vision that Tenshi had was so cool... tragic, but cool. I agree, I'm surprised that she's so easily receptive to the "angelic" changes (XD) that she's going through, but that's probably good for her. Keep bringing more, hun! :)
person Celery22
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
o.o; So much excellent juicy information... I love it. It's simply excellent. Keep it up Saige, I need more! I feel so deprived of information... You're so good at keeping me in the dark. -.-;

Can't wait for more! ^^b
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chap! Intense! :D I think you put Amanda instead of Angela once, though... XD Anyway, keep it up! Hope your creative juices spawn again soon! ^_^
person ikkichi
schedule August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Heh, wow. I already have a mental voice for Tenshi because of her name. And now every time I see her name, I'll be having Angel Beats! flashbacks, as well as hear a certain seiyuu's voice (can't remember her name at the moment, though).

Seems interesting so far, though. So onto the next chapter!
person ikkichi
schedule August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Note to self: Listening to the Spice Girls and having childhood flashbacks is not conducive to reading something. *sighs* And yet I can't stop listening to their catchy-ass music. But anyway.

The end made me chuckle a little, 'cause I added some sarcasm to Tenshi's question of if she should be standing. And the accent over Michael's 'e'. That also gave me flashbacks of reading Ares, and now I pronounce his name like "Mi-kay-ul". x'D Can't wait for the next chapter, and hopefully a SG song won't come on halfway through the chapter and disrupt my reading experience.
schedule July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwh, Tenshi and Angie are cute. I loved the opening scenes with Misty -- super adorable. They don't live together, do they? I wonder if Isabelle really thought she was the Miracle Girl or if she was doing it for her own publicity or whatever. It's scary that the demons can just blow smoke into the average human being and kill them! O.O Scary!! Thank god Tenshi's special! ;) Can't wait for more, hun!
person Celery22
schedule July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
xD I love Tenshi's smast assery! Is that Michael , as in the archangel? makes me wonder about the identity of the mysterious one... So I wanna know what the deal is between Tenshi and Angela! Give us more!! ...please?

<3 it alot!