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July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, thanks for keeping this updated. Will she ever get her wings?
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June 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a really impressive story, please continue it.
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May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i truly love ur story and would love to read more. i want to find out whats going to happen between the two angles and what is going to happen with the main character, if she is going to help with the war or go back home or even find out who wants her to stay. is angie her sole mate, is that y she is the only one to remember her. i would really like to read more!!!
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December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
To start off with, I'm really happy you're back. ^^
I really liked this chapter, but I liked the first person way more. I think you do better from a first person perspective. I really hope you're planning to continue with updates, I can't wait to see where this is all heading, you're dropping alot of little hints at something greater.
Again, really happy you're back. <3
I really liked this chapter, but I liked the first person way more. I think you do better from a first person perspective. I really hope you're planning to continue with updates, I can't wait to see where this is all heading, you're dropping alot of little hints at something greater.
Again, really happy you're back. <3
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August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
D: I always hate that when someone's like, "*going to release possible important information, only to be interrupted by someone who agrees without letting them finish and thus no information is actually released*," even though I do that sometimes (real life or not). x'D And Kari's (can I call her 'Kari'?) comment about her being in school after the fireball incident just made me laugh. But I can't wait to find out what Mel and Ayden were referring to, since my curiosity has been piqued.
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August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
@.@ That's a little overwhelming... Just a whole lot to take in is all.
It feels a bit jumpy in spots, but I still enjoyed it. ^^
It feels a bit jumpy in spots, but I still enjoyed it. ^^
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August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm not exactly sure what they're getting at in the end... but I'm assuming Karianna's gonna own some mofos up in the future, yeah?! :D I giggled when Melissa told Ayden about Kari's incident with Sir Malcolm. He sort of deserved it, haha. I guess Melissa is starting to grow on me, but I still miss Angela. :( Anyway, update soon! :)
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August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mm. Gotta love the amusing banter between characters. Have to admit, though: The whole moving (and talking, right?) stone statue would probably creep me out if I didn't crap my pants first. I also had some Sword in the Stone (Disney movie version, 'cause I'm positive that there's more than one version of the story) and Fable I flashbacks during that scene as well. The ending, however, pretty much made me cackle with laughter, and go, "Yes! Excellent!" 'Cause there's nothin' better than a shocker that big, right?
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August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Finally made time to read this chapter, and one of my first thoughts was, "Why didn't I make time before this? D':" Although, sadly, I think my favorite part was when Kaori said that she's still the same person, but she just shakes things up more when her being a half-earth angel was revealed. That just got me when I read it and I couldn't help but laugh a little. Nice job there. And I can't wait to see how Tenshi's going to react (not very pleasantly, I'm assuming) to how she's being whisked away.
Onto the next chapter!
Onto the next chapter!
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August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So. Aside from my lesbo-vision acting up immensely during this chapter, the ending made me go, "Wait... WHAT?" at how the fire angels were killed off because of their powers and the potential disasters waiting if they lost their tempers. And then, it was like, "Bam. This is how things really happened in your past," with the flashbacks, which then caused some major revelations for Tenshi. Mm. Now I'm really anxious to read the next chapter.