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schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
U dedicated a chapter to me!! Dude, that's beyond mega, thank u :) read the chapter and squealed haha
antonio with the weird spelling has to GO!! Seriously!
K loved it. Ur parting line, when he says that he pretends to be asleep just to hear him say I love u slayed me!
K I'm gonna read the next chapter tonight, going out nw. Glad ur updating regularly :)
person Lana
schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Break my heart why don't you. I adore this story although it is a lot like self torture. I just can't see Daniel growing a back spine and confessing his undying love, So watching Adam go through this is hear breaking. Anyhow I live the song "Lie to Me" I have been listening to it quite religiously lately
Please update soon
Lana
person fudge
schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loving this story, so glad you update quickly!
person Lana
schedule May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Im in love with your story and the song and post(on your blog). It just brakes my heart, I get so happy every time you update your story. Please give them a happy ending or something I don't know its breaking my heart. Is a lot easer to get over someone not loving you back but is heart wrenching that they both love each other.
schedule May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love u. But then u know that already lol. Loved this chapter, this is my favourite story of yours, it's the one that first grabbed my attention. This chapter was bloody hot, n lurved the bit about kurt n courtney, only u could come up with that. Loved it.
person eatmorefish
schedule May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahh I'm loving this one too :) I am actually really enjoying the fact that Daniel is hurting himself by lying to himself and Adam getting hurt in the process--creates fantastic drama. Looking forward to more and I'm super glad that the story is flowing (yay for us too :P)! :)
person Morgeth
schedule May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I was pleasantly surprised by this story. I'm a romantic at heart so I can't help hoping for a happy ending, but I hope you can keep your inspiration/momentum with this story, because I am officially addicted.
And I hope Daniel will get his head out of his ass long enough to realize that he's abusing the one person who really seems to love him.
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey db, glad to see this up again!

I thought you mentioned the narrator's name is Daniel?

Anyway, this version does sound a lot better than the last. Hopefully this will be w/o the physical pain of the last one....:)
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes, thank you for clearing up the years Daniel and Adam have known one another. But as another reader asked, why did Daniel marry (or even date) Jenny if he was so in love with Adam?

I feel so bad for the both of them.
person kathy
schedule February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love your writing style and I really like this story. I hope you update soon!!!!!

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