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eek haven't been reviewing, but finally caught up now :) Glad to see how this story is progressing--loving the plot and all the latest developments. I think I can guess what the 'secret' is about Adam and why he is mad at his mom so I'd love to see how it plays out and if I'm even right! This story is frustrating in that good way in which I just really empathize with Adam and want to shake sense into Dan...sooo great work as usual :)

Ahhhhh, I can't believe you left it there! Mean, mean author! lol

What is Adam talking about? What doesn't his family believe?

The person telling the story is wrong, if he really loved this person who means more to him than anything, he'd give up everything for him... love is the only thing we really live for... if your lucky enough to have it... to walk away from it is a crime.

An if you can stand and regret something after its too late to do anything about it... your a complete utter fool. Love without regret, for love is its own reward!

And screw anyone who doesn't accept you for who you are and who you love! G

Hey, isn't that the best part of being sick though? Not eating and losing weight! lol Hope you're feeling better. When you mentioned aches and pains, did you get tested for Lyme? I know that disease is pretty prevalent in my area. If you catch it early, it's easily treatable. Anyway, I hope you're a lot better! :)

I can't believe Dan just left the hospital! I don't care what he was thinking; he should have stayed there to try to talk to Adam. I just can't understand why Dan's doing what he's doing to Adam. I know I keep rehashing this, but Adam's self-destructive behavior is a direct result of not being able to be with Dan. They're both miserable but Dan won't do anything to change that.

Anyway...looking foward to more! :)

I forgot to mention that I think changing pov's is fine, like if you wanted the next chapter to be in Adam's pov. That would be fine; that way the reader gets to read about what's going on in his head.

Also, I read Gslinger's review, and I agree 110 percent. He/she hit the nail on the head. Dan should do everything in his power to get Adam back, and screw anyone else who doesn't agree with him. Eventually they may get over it, and Jenny, poor, sweet Jenny. Dan's doing her a disservice; he'll never be able to give her the relationship she wants. He'll never be able to love her fully to the full extent of his abilities b/c his heart belongs to Adam. He needs to come clean with her so she can move on and find someone who will love her the way she deserves; someone who can give his whole heart to her.

Ok, sorry for rambling. I patiently await the next update! :)

Good luck with your new job! :)

Yeah, you posted this last chapter at the end of the Reflection story. lol

I think Daniel better come clean w/Jenny. He will NEVER be happy with her, while he's still in love with Adam. It's obvious Adam is still in love with him and Jenny needs to be able to move on. It's not fair leaving her hanging. It's not fair to Adam for Daniel to be stringing him along also. He needs to man up and tell Jenny already. Enough is enough! lol


Have a great Memorial Day, dieby! =)

love this story, great ch

Good luck on your new job! Hope all goes well! :)

All I can say is poor Adam, poor Daniel. They're both struggling to what, forget one another? Jenny can never hold a candle to Adam and of course I'm sure Antoine could never hold a candle to Daniel. Daniel's gotta face facts: Adam is in love with him and he's in love with Adam and the sooner he takes care of letting Jenny in on this, the better. Better to break it off before the wedding.....

Great chapter, as usual! :)

That was intense. I like that u explained why and hw he proposed coz in the earlier version the whole thing was ambiguous n u found urself thinking why on earth did he propose to her when he was this heavily involved with Adam. But I totally get it now, and it's very plausible. N that's just it about hw u write, the reactions are very realistic that I feel Incan see it in my mind as I'm Reading it. In short, another chapter well done :)

Hey, great chapter! But why is Daniel torturing himself with Adam and Jenny? If he truly loves Adam, he should be with him. Yes, Jenny's a great girl, but she'll eventually get over it and move on. It's not fair to all three of them if Daniel marries Jenny and then is miserable b/c he's in love with Adam.

Your writing's fine; the mistakes are minimal. If you want me to proof the chapters again, let me know, but I couldn't be as fast as you post them! lol Whatever you want is fine. I'd be more than happy to proof it again! :)