rate_review Reviews

Sooo, i was looking around and came across this story. (It caught my attention)
Funny thing is, when I saw the quote/lyric at the beginning of the first chapter,
I was like; This has got to be CandyCaner's story (Cause you did the same thing with Therapy xD)
So I look at the Author and... BAM! I was right.
Yay. :D
Anyways enough of my ramblings...
Im reallyyyyyyyy liking this story... alot!
Im excited for the third installment.
Maybe it'll be longer than than what you originally planned.. maybe, hopefully? HINT!
:P
Please do continue it with it.
I must say you're writing skills are amazing,
like someone earlier mentioned, you have a way with words.
Which is a good thing, it keeps me hooked on your work.
:)

I'm very intrigued in subjects of divorce, kid, and lezzies they are subjecta that capture my attention, good job my short term attention has been caught.

I literally pulled back and said 'Oh shit!' out loud causing my mom to come into my room and ask 'What.'... most awkward moment of my life. i think it will only be trumped by me outing myself...

btw the reason i had to pull back was the fact that i was following the story so intently i was literally leaning into the screen, only to get hit with that last line... classic.

waiting patiently for more

O: I need to find where this place exists, and then move there promptly. Seems like there's just lesbians (and gay marriage!?) abound there. I find myself quite liking this world you've created. xD

And I keep laughing at all these cheesy lines I'm coming up with for the Romeo/Juliet(te) thing. They're about as bad as some of the worst pick-up lines I've heard, if not worse or one of them. But I can't wait for the next chapter. 8D

Great new story! It contrasts so greatly with Therapy and that's why I think I like it so much already. Looking forward to the next update :]

I love, love, LOVE IT!!! There's not enough stars to give you to rate this wonderful story!! Keep writing!

you always do have a way with words, but i have to say, you mentioning the woman with forest green eyes made me think back to my favorite principal/cousin/foster parent ^^.

waiting anxiously for more *hint*please update*hint* XD

Ooohhh. Another chapter or two more, eh? Melikes. A lot.

I had a good laugh, though, 'cause when the phone reception started cutting out, my first thoughts for some reason were, "SILENT HIIIIILLLL!" No lie. But then a few lines later, my brain's mental topic switched and I thought to myself, "This could make a kinda clichéd horror movie. Or an interesting porno." It left me confused as to why I thought the last part. Maybe I didn't get enough sleep or something.

But, anyway, can't wait to read more.

I clicked this because I liked the summary and didn't bother inquiring further. Right away this story draws me in, the first person, present tense narrator is enticingly written and at the end of the chapter I see your penname and go HA! That's exactly how Therapy is written!

Please update soon.

Milly