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by CandyCaner

schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh damn O_O haha that was amazing i always love reading your work. On to more! *goes to read more of CandyCancers work*
person jackpot7374
schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Intense Candy! Great work!!
person Celery22
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh... Glorious in a sad sort of way. It speaks to me on a somewhat personal level. There is, for a short time after cheating on someone, and having to admit it to yourself, a certain freedom. You captured it so perfectly. I loved it!
person ikkichi
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You don't say... Well, Iowa's now one of my favorite states. XD It sure beats Illinois, I'm betting. And if either of these two women were actually real, I think I'd be too stunned to do anything. As lame as that sounds.

*sucks in breath sharply* Damn. That was a (very) nice wake-up gift, even if I now feel like I just got trolled. Had to laugh, though, at the part when Mysterious Divorcée gets a gleam in her eyes. My first thought was, "LAWL. Raep gleam!" x'D

(Wow. One of the CAPTCHA for this review is "free-and-easy", while the other one is "Folies". This amuses me.)
person Harlequin
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was jaw dropping!! Reading that last chapter, I know for a dead on fact I want to read more. Continue writing for all your fans out there =] You're amazing at it
person Milly
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Now, to see such a thing on a grown woman's fridge, I find it a little bizarre. Coloring as a hobby or stress-reliever was understandable, but... she doesn't color inside the lines? That doesn't make sense. "

That part I found cute and hilarious and brilliant at the same time.
person Milly
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This has been a very good quickie *teehee*

You are good at writing, please do keep blessing us with your gift!

Milly
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
she moves from one cheater to another... lol, talk about bad luck. or good luck depending on how you look at it... *looks away and whistles*

this was a nice read, (i enjoyed it) looking forward to more from you. ^^
person 279180
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the last line, it's awesome!
person Celery22
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, what IS in store? You've got me all sorts of curious now. I'm liking this. Keep up the good writing. ^^b