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July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awesome want more
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July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Holy fuck and all that's pink!" Jesus, what a great line! I know Lang said it in ch. 1 also. I just finished both chapters; what a funny story! Lang is so funny; "Ok, Kasper, I'll remember that so I can scream it later."
Love the story and btw: I think you just passed the final in your SSS! You did so well, I don't think you even need to go to grad school. :)
Love the story and btw: I think you just passed the final in your SSS! You did so well, I don't think you even need to go to grad school. :)
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July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fuck a squirrel that was good! lol that line made me laugh. I know you're not going for an actual storyline with this but I still find that I am being drawn in slightly by the one that is there. I think you should keep writing this and the sex isn't bad but it is a little comical.
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July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo, I really like where this is going and I would love if you wrote more. I can already see myselt enwrapped in such an intense story.
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July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, Please do continue :)
I alway did have a thing for taller bottoms :D
I alway did have a thing for taller bottoms :D
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July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i swear to cheesecake - you better post more!
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July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
O...M...G...this fic hits my serious kinks...tall guy w/ significantly shorter, role reversal topping...I feel like there's going to be dirty talking in the next chapter too? Yes? Dirty talking? I really love you're main character's voice (do we know anyone's names yet? Well besides the ex. hahaha that's okay, it's kinda' hot not knowing). I look forward to reading more!