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August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I play adult games like this but reading it makes it so much more engaging and intense. Written well, appealing to my tastes, I'm happy to have run into it
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August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow...What can I possibly say...other than this was...just plainly hot. I mean damn, you are good. I just finished the last chapter, or at least the latest (Chapter 3), and I'm hooked. I'll eagerly be awaiting more entries into this fic should you decide to continue, and you should, lol.
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August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next to the poor theif girl and her as weilding friend. They just can't catch a break but their pleasurable torture is very intense, very hot. Please update again soon!
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August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! It left me wanting more. Can't wait for your next update! :)
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August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like it, more please!!
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July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far. I wonder what other beasts she will encounter as well as what the mage will do to her. Looking forward to chapter two.