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he-he-he very entertaining! I'm a bit surprised that he's not protesting any more than he is, just follows along, but, on the other hand, he's on a mission and might risk that by fighting back... I wonder, however, if he will reach that 'enough'-point and what might happen then... how far will he go in the line of duty...? ;)

Oh I already like Topher! Can't wait for more!

Hi again! Can't wait for it all to kick off, I wonder where it will go... very excited about you thinking of making this into a series, judging by the story so far, I think I'll tag along for those rides too!
I doubt that it was only me who found the fact that Exit had bananas for breakfast hilarious... I mean, I know they are a great source of energy but... you know... monkey-boy had bananas... -gives Exit a pint of my favorite Ice-cream; Ben & Jerry's 'Chunky monkey'- Here! I doubt they have these in your world... ;)
Oh, a typo if you feel like fixing it: the taxi-driver "gets boared" should, of course, be "bored"... not a big mistake... I called an OC of mine, named Shift, "Shit". And not just once... ;)

Aaahh... interesting... Is vin a little jealous...? ;) I like that office-crush, I'm almost sad that Exit has to go away when there was some sort of progress... yeah I know... married... -sigh- and I don't like cheating, but... ah, I just want Exit to have what he wants! I don't think tha'ts too much to ask... and I know Exit agrees! ;)

lovly story ^^ would like to read more
Thank you

This story is actually just getting better and better... :D

So Glad you put that description of Exit at the end, because before that I was having visuals of chimps with a tails... not necessary an attractive visual. In contrast to your description. Just for future information, a description can be inserted into the story by using certain devices such as the main character looking into a mirror or even available shop window. Early on in the story especial when the main character is different than a regular human and you want him to be consider sexy or have a certain sex appeal, A description is needed as soon as possible. It helps your reader visualize the story. Not tryin to be critical, but helpful... for I like your story very much, and look for to reading more soon! G
LOL just to understand further is Exit's tail Hairless

Oh, hot chapter! Thanks for the description, it was, I must admit, somewhat surprising... at first, I thought he had to hide his tail to hide that fact that he wasen't human, but with eyes like that, that's a give-away anyway... so why hide his tail? Is is a convinence thing, not having it out where it could be injured, and not having to have holes in the pants...?

WOW

that was hot!!!

em ... I never would have guessed that he is 18! He is much mature for this age!

The description was great about his looks, just what is his exact hair color and hair length? If I find some time I might picture him (if you don't mind!) and what about the tail color? the same as his skin? Is it fluffy or flat? lol It's just nice to know?

Any way, Gr8 job! just please update soon ;)

You have a very interesting story going so far. The only thing I would like more of is a decription of Exit. The idea of having a species other than human is great but I can't get a picture of Exit in my head. I know that he is likely short, has dark hair that shines blue green and has a tail, prehensile if he can wrap it around his waist (or perhaps it's like a cats?)... I have a picture of what the other characters look like but with Exit being the main character and so different more decription would be helpful.