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by Melsiebug

person jeazard
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, two new chapters at once! *_*x

So echobacks grow real old, huh.
Oh btw, I really like that name! It's creative.

Like how Tallis accepts that punishment. A ship is not a democracy; the captain gives an order, his crew follows it. You start breaking that rule in small things, you'll start doing it for bigger things, too.

Can't wait for next week! =D
~jea
person jeazard
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This just cost me about three hours of potential sleep, but it was SO worth it.
Love the story, I really do! Exit is an adorable protagonist, I can't help but like him. It's got to be the cutest thing ever how he's all confused and practically pouting when his kidnapper refuses to fuck him. XD
I still prefer Ry ("Hi thar, pretty, have some roses, come over so when can have more sex" ♥), but if the captain really has a thing for tieing people up and dominating them properly (spanking y/y?) I might just warm up to him. XD

Looking forward to the next update! =)
~Jeanne
person mashael
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooh sex next please~
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cheers! Smex. This is really good, I absolutely adore Topher. I've said that before though, he's adorable. I hope he and Exit actually do mess around.. Can't wait for more!
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Sad. He's still a dick though. Lol. Can't wait to read the next update.
person mashael
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the sex part :)
schedule September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad I started reading this. I've taken a great liking to it. :)
person Roya7777
schedule September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!

It's getting more exciting each chapter! :D I have not had the time to read it since chapter 6, so it was a real treat last night and gush don't I love it?! ;) especially after chapter 10 :) I really love all the new characters even Topher! lol and I 'm not going to get any till next week?! oh ... T.T

Well, well done! I'm really looking forward to see how the pirates are going to become Exit's FAMILY ^_^
person mashael
schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love the new chapter, can;t wait to read ut next
schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love Topher!! I can't wait to see what you do with him... Anywho, I adore this story and can't wait for more!