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can't wait to read more~

That kind of typo would have made me giggle. The waste one I mean. But anyway, I seemed to have missed the last few updates, and I ended up reading a few chapters. Not that I minded giving up my time to it. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

*lol!* loved the admiral... I think I blushed as much as poor Exit...

'cutting a hole in the side of the unfortunate fruit', haha

Finally I got around to review this story. I didn't do it although I read every chapter, what can I say I'm lazy.
I love this story, the characters are well rounded and the plot progresses not too fast. Nice.
And about the homophones, I'm glad I have Lisa, otherwise I'd be lost.
Two chapters a week, I love that too.

Liked the chapter, especially the bathing scene - hilarious! XD
The admiral's kinda funny, too, though I can't quite see why he'd give his son's pets any sort of hisory lesson. They're just pets, officially, right, not even a proper lover or anything.

As for the there/their thing: one can read past it, it's not like it's that bad. XD
But you could easily go through the chapter with ctrl-F after you're done and find all "their"s, then check if they're correct. =) It's a small thing, but I thnik it's worth the effort.

Anyway, thank you so much for the regular updates! ♥
~jea

lovly chapter dear, can't wait for more :)

Ha ha I loved the bath scene

Yay, new chapter! =D
Figures such a punishment would shock Exit, it must seem babaric to him.
And poor Tallis, I kinda like him.

Just one thing though:
THERE indicates a place or point/aspect.
THEIR is a personal pronoun.
=)

So thius is still awesome. I'm starting to see where loyalties can get mixed up too. Love it!

oww poor Tallis thats harsh >_<
loveing the last 2chapter, thenk you