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for Exit Strategy

by Melsiebug

person Roya7777
schedule November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This new update was very very erotic! well done! ;)
person chart451
schedule November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very erotic. I especially liked the part where Quinn is directing Topher how to pleasure Exit at the base of his tail.
person jeazard
schedule November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, that was just about the PRETTIEST thing ever! *_*x
Especially when Topher was licking and finger fucking Exit from behind. Oh, and when they were just making out all the time, and when the Captain was totally watching them and and and EVERYTHING!
Wow. Absolutely beautiful. Thx! XD
schedule November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn. I thought that they were going to take that further. I wonder what the captain would think of that though. Eh, doesn't matter. They were interrupted anyway.
person jeazard
schedule November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, this is pretty! I whole heartedly approve of some Topher/Exit action! *_*x

Can't wait for Sunday! =D
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens! I have to say my fave moments are between Exit and Topher but I've said that before... I'm curious to see who's going to end up with who, etc. But I love the plot outside the romance. Though really there's only romance b/w Topher and Exit and screwing b/w Exit and the captain now that I think about it. Huh. Can't wait!
schedule October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooh... Jasper is doing something baaad.. I loved seeing Exit and Topher bond even more. It made me smile, and I even giggled thinking of Exit covered in mango juice. Never been a real fan of eating a mango myself, but I don't hate them. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
person jeazard
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

thx for clearing things up for me yet again. ^^;;
Thinking about it afterwards, I also figured that the Captain might have asked Exit because after all he does share a cabin with Topher, who might have said something to him. Maybe a line to that effect to make it clearer would have helped.

Liked chapter 28! The punishment was described really well, especially the contrast between Topher and Exit, their punishment and the way the crew sees them.
Hope Exit recovers soon. =)
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was very sweet. I feel like the three of them are really bonding. I love it.
schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Exit. Love the bonding between him and Topher though. I wonder if Exit is going to get sick from getting the cat. I would feel bad, but it would make a nice little bit of drama. I can't wait to see the next update.