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for Exit Strategy

by Melsiebug

person wynja
schedule December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for an amazing story! I HAVE been bad at reviewing, sorry, but I have loved it... Seriously, if the review-system on this site was better, without the damn "passwords"-thing I would left one more often… I don’t know, it’s just annoying and takes more time than on other sites… but hey, not your fault… Like I said, amazing story and a very good, sad end… My heart breaks, but when I was in the middle of the story I had no idea how you could end it without people actually dying… so it was a very good, believable end… I find it funny how my feelings about his male love-interests has changed… I SO wanted him to be with Vin from the start, and thought Ry was just a horrible spoiled rich guy out for an exotic fuck… now Vin annoyed the hell out of me and Ry seems really caring… but no one can take the place of Quint and Topher… -sigh- I understand if there can’t be a happy ending there, but damn… I so want at least one last meeting or something… -sighs deeply again- But we can’t always get what we want… happy writing! I haven’t read “the boy…” yet, but I think I’ll check it out during the holidays…
person jeazard
schedule December 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh... oh, wow.
I did not expect that.
I kinda expected this to end, like you described, in that kind of complete happy ending, where he would return to Quint and Topher.

Buuut, if you promise more stories with Exit (and this interesting world you created) I'll trade my happy anding for that ongoing project of yours. ^^x

Can't wait to see the last chapter!
~jea

PS: I would also love for Exit and the captain to meet again, some time in th epossibly far future. ^^x
schedule December 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you are killing me with these cliffhangers .I feel bad for exit I know he came to care about the people there but there was no way that it would not come to this.
person jeazard
schedule December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG! O___Ox

Even knowing that this moment would come, it's still so hard to watch!
Oh, Exit~ ;_;x

I'd also like to let you know that this story brightens up my Wednesdays and Sundays every time without fail. I'll miss it when it's finished.

<3
~jea
person cravedom
schedule December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was very exciting and this story continues to get better. I would be happy that one of those poor girls finally did something but hate to think of the punishment.
person jeazard
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear god, Exit...
If this is what makes him happy - the ship, the captain, Topher - why throw it all away?
But betraying his friends can't be easy either, of course, and neither is telling Quint the truth. >_<;;

Can't wait to read on!
~jea
schedule December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this stroy it just gets better and better ,I am to the point that I check for updates at least once a day
person Rosei
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love your story. Very imaginative. Love the pirates and the shipping details.
Love the mystery. Love the love the Captain feels for Topher and Exit. Love Tophers
dialog! He's a pistol! Love the various settings! Love Exits tail! Love the
sensuous sex! Wonder how Exit is going to get out his mess and still get to love those
he loves.

Super duper!!!!!
Thanks!
R
person Rosei
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love your story. Very imaginative. Love the pirates and the shipping details.
Love the mystery. Love the love the Captain feels for Topher and Exit. Love Tophers
dialog! He's a pistol! Love the various settings! Love Exits tail! Love the
sensuous sex! Wonder how Exit is going to get out his mess and still get to love those
he loves.

Super duper!!!!!
Thanks!
R
person jeazard
schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Shirt shit SHIT.
Exit needs to seriously learn not to drink so much. He should know better than that! >_<;;;;
This is not gonna be pretty.

~jea