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Are the characters from the prequel/sidestory going to appear in Valentine's time? I got the impression that Valentine and the guy who stole his stuff were going to be main characters, and both of them are too paranoid and suspicious to make friends with a werewolf. I have absolutely no clue where this story is going (which is wonderful; there are too many stories with repetitive plotlines).

Thank you

This is very interesting. Still a bit hard to understand, but the second chapter helped a bit. I'm kinda just going with the flow and assuming things will be explained a bit more (such as, How old is "Valentine", why is he alone (parents? friends? etc.)

I really enjoy your character's inner dialogue and voice, and I am looking forward to more.

Holy Mother of God! I LOVE YOU! and I love this story! I haven't finished reading chap. 2 yet, but I just got to were you talked about the fluoride in the water. The way you talk about politics and shit, there are not many people like you on this site. I usually get so pissed off when I see someone talking about politics in a story because they usually don't know what the fuck they're talking about and just want to push their own biased bull onto other naive little girls and boys who don't know shit about shit and will just eat it up so they can feel cool and 'in the know'. But you! You dazzle me! Our brain waves must be on the same path or something. PLEASE don't stop writing! It's hard to come by an author who is smart AND a good writer.

Valentine is hilarious. I love the way you right; it's funny as hell. I can't wait for more!

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How the fuck did I mess that up...>_>

Great first chapter, I love how you've introduced a lot of information without making it feel tacked on, or overwhelming. Your premiss is developing nicely, and I have to say I'm hooked. It's always nice to read something this well thought out, and different from anything else I've read.

I'm liking this so far! Your concept seems well put together and your main character is intelligent and believable. It's been a while since I've enjoyed a story, so I felt compelled to give a review. So much M/M out there utilizes standby character types that fall flat in their pursuit of the perfect role-type, this in conjunction with a poorly developed environment can really lessen the impact of a piece. There are a couple of writers that I probably should have supported sooner as well, VelvetMace and some of Lambent's work I truly enjoyed reading. Anywhoo - good luck with the rest of this!

Yeah! keep writing. I want to know why/how the world is apocalyptic and why he hates society. You haven't even said "werewolf" yet, so you HAVE to continue. ^^

Oh, I like this. It's funny too. I can't wait until you update again. I want to know more about this 'end-of-the-world.'

I'm hooked, and so far I love your concept. The set up is compelling, and I really find myself liking Valentine, and both his ability to adapt to the situation, and his resentment of it at the same time. I really hope you keep writing, I will definately keep my eye out for it because I would love to keep reading it. Thank you.