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for Kira

by AbsintheDreams

schedule August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was probably the best story i've read on this site yet, it was amazing. I especially liked the last line, when she joins the horde of girls that want to serve him. keep up the good work!

(there were two typos that i noticed, one towards the end, it says he left a rose on her rose, though i don't know if that's just some imagery i'm not feeling. the other is when he goes down on her, there's a "to instead of a "no.")
schedule July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
realmente hermoso, espero pronta actualizacion, ana maria