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July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's good to see this story again, it was a great read the first time, and I'm sure it'll be awesome this time too.
I think there's a type'o in there: 'Hus skin went pale and grey', I think you menat his skin.
Also, about the name change, I didn't really mind the cliche that much, though I must say I had to get used to it. I guess I'll have to get used to Jasper now, which normally just reminds me of my idiot cousin who is anything but masculin XD
I think there's a type'o in there: 'Hus skin went pale and grey', I think you menat his skin.
Also, about the name change, I didn't really mind the cliche that much, though I must say I had to get used to it. I guess I'll have to get used to Jasper now, which normally just reminds me of my idiot cousin who is anything but masculin XD
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July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, i like making vampires purr! so intriguing! I can't wait for more. btw, you're cliffies suck. sorry for not having a more in depth comment, I will use the excuse that your story is just so good that it left me speechless! <3
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I read it some time ago...and always wanted you to update it!
So I`m reading it again!
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So I`m reading it again!
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I'm so glad to see this story pop up again. I'm not really into this genre (the whole vampire/werewolf thing), but I read all of your last version of this in one night. Wonderful, loveable characters, and some seriously sexy...sex. I can't wait to see the rework and I'm already liking the changes so far a lot. It's stories like this that keeps me coming back to AFF.net x]
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July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh very cool. I like that the protagonist is bored with life, not flirting with danger because of some hidden trauma that will be revealed 75% of the way through, swiftly dealt with, then never spoken of again (because he's all better now!), you know? General dissatisfaction is a far more complex problem to explore. I identify best with characters who are little out of it (like Holden in Catcher in the Rye, except he was a little whiny). All in all, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
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July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was reading the original story to this. What happened??? It was such a good fic, why didn't you just continue where you left off? I really wanted to know what was going to happen next.
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July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, did you know that your story is being rewritten under a different authors name? I just want to make sure that someone is not stealing this story. By the way, I am a die hard fan of the original story. Please do not change a thing. Your work is awesome. And I love the name Fenrir. Jasper is so sissyish. Fenrir soundos like a rock solid man's name. Who am I kidding, I loved everything about this story, except that you stopped writting it. Please finish the original version.
Thank you!
Thank you!
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July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nice edit! Can't wait for the rest!
xoxo
xoxo
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July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
My, very different. Mark lives. Sebastian has less immediate edge this way. I don't know what to make of it, but of course I'll stick to it! I've missed Sabastian and Fen. But are we still getting Fen (re-named), or an entirely new guy?
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July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your style reminds me of Anne Rice (Hope I don't piss you off by
saying that). Not that it's convoluted (A. Rice loves her run on paragraphs) but you have the similar way
penning preternatural characters struggling among mortals.
I'd love to see where this is headed.
Looking forward to your next update.
~WR
saying that). Not that it's convoluted (A. Rice loves her run on paragraphs) but you have the similar way
penning preternatural characters struggling among mortals.
I'd love to see where this is headed.
Looking forward to your next update.
~WR