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dude i am loving this story so much!serious talent!

nice story :)

Lolz man, your chapters are just getting better and better everyday. I love the slow seduction of Sebastian. XD

As much as I enjoy the regular updates, the super short chapters are really jarring...it feels like as soon as the chapter starts it's over, and I want more!

I liked this chapter quite a bit. It's good to see Sebastian being assertive.

You know what I love with this story? I love the fact you make their relationship so intense and all the while avoiding all those cliché lines. It’s so refreshing that the tension between them is more than “You’re beautiful so now I love you.” It’s fun to read about their attraction without having it spelled out.

You are very good at describing things. I find their emotions to be believable. The story also has a very nice flow. I really like how they interact with each other. :3 The wicked humor in it has made me laugh quite a few times ^w^

The waving genitals in this chapter made my day.

Wow, I really do love this story. That last chapter was so cute, and I can't wait to see how things develop.

“How about a strip tease?”
hoho
always bring the smile from my mouth to into my eyes.
And if we could pray,my guess is, it would be for more ppl who can bend their words like they bend...well y'know;)

OH,yeah I remeber the mcmuffin thing; muffins are tasty(blue(s)berry is my favourite:)) hey, I wouldn't mind watching Jasper eat wither(the name is growing on me;))
Hmmm, I was really crushed withthe whole no-kissforeplay after foodplay(muffin) first time I read this.
But not this time. You delivered. Sexual tension is here kekeke. Anyways I'm looking forward to read more.
Oh,I do wonder whatyouplayn inthe future with the chase,hiding and stuff.
Can we except new characters in the story(sidekicks in spandex or villains wearing only a loin cloth?)
Do tell.
Have fun writting.

Whaaa! I was holding my breath for that kiss ya know!? Lolz it's amazing that you updated so fast again. Jasper is such a teaser. XD

Lolz wow, I just love the sexual tension. XD Jasper is too cute for words and Sebastian is just so awkward around him that it's hilarious. Thank you for the fast updates!

There are few things I love more then M/M stories , sexual tension and the supernatural. Needeless to say I'm thrilled to have found your story. It moves at a pace I like (fast but not so fast that you have to spend every chapter adding ANs about things that were left out)and I also like that Jasper is arrogant without being hated by the reader for being too cocky. You're a dude too? Big props for that! I don't know a single M/M writer. There may be tons but I think everyone just assumes all male erotica writers are women. You write awesome and you seem even more awesome (yeah I read the bio: silly facebook games? Def a win.) Can't wait until Thurs!