rate_review Reviews

I found this through greylaws site and this is great! i love the love/hate usty dynamic between Sebastian and Jasper. I love the names by the way, very classy without being to stereotypical, which makes things nice and fresh. I also love how Sebastian is all neurotic and clean in stead of being a typical omnipotent i-am-a-blood-sucking-bastard type of vampire. I also must thank you not for using the dreaded sparkles *shudders* all in all this is fantastic and i am eagerly anticipating the next installment.

I...need there to be more of this. D:

The characters are fantastic; I LOVE Jasper...he's so CUTE...and sexy, of course. Really, really, really sexy...and Sebastian is effin' awesome as well. I can't get over the way you describe the way they /move/...and their interactions are just priceless. It's realistic and hilarious and sexy and touching every now and then, and...just yeah.

I adore it so far. I hope it updates soon, because it's been a while since I've been so into a story...a novel length, non fanfiction story? Jeez, years. I haven't read original fiction in ages, but this really brings back the memories and...I'm so very glad I decided to try it.

Awesome, awesome job so far.

~Dagger

P.S. I don't know how many authors who get their stories posted their check, but I found this story first on the GreyLaw database, and left an identical review there, but then I wanted more and decided to follow your link to your author page and see if you'd written other things. After arriving I figured I might as well drop the review here too, as it's more likely to be seen, so sorry for double-posting, but needless to say I am thoroughly enjoying this work so far, and hope you will continue eventually despite whatever difficulties you might be enduring.

I like your story, I can t wait for another chapter. I like werewolf and vampire pairings and yours is one of the best. I would write more, if my English was acceptable (I can still read, at least). Best wishes with writing, I am looking forward for update :D.

ITS BEEN SO LOONG. YOU SAID YOU'D DO EVERY SAT at least! PLEASE UPODATE ASAP

ITS BEEN TOO LOONG. THOUGHT YOU WERE UPDATEIN EVERY WK. UPDATE

I really like this story. I would have pissed my pants in Sebastian's place, alone with a werewolf. I like the way you make them evolve and I can't wait to read more. I nearly thought you'd leave us with a "Sebastian stepped into the alley and felt a bullet tear through him" or something.
Please update soon!

PLEASE UPDATE..

Are you ok!!?? No update for my fave story = ( I can't wait for the sexual tension to be over...pleease ease my pain ~puppy eyes~ and I feel bad for jacob then i do for the hunters...they are just stupid lol who in their right mind would follow in when u know the man is about to change?! crazies... and they hurt my baby =(

I just read all of the chapters at once and I love this a lot :) I love both Sebastian and Jasper and it's fun watching Jasper slowly wear Sebastian down. And in the hottest ways possible.

I just knew that the wolf would consider Sebastian its mate and wouldn't hurt him.

I look forward to more smexy funtimes :D

i would like, totally go out naked.Why waste time waiting for Sebastian at all.
Besides I sincerely doubt anyone would mind looking hahahahahasha!
btw. I liked reading about the transformation this time, although I'm not sure didi you change soemthing or not(this/draft)