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I love it! And I absolutely adore Sebastian. He's adorable

Chapter 2

Hey fellow nanowrimo-er or is it ist? maybe not then it would be nanowri moist. Doesn't sound pleasant. Anyway...cool vampires. And he got the shit kicked out of him, well the blood out of him anyways. I like villainous heroes or heroes who do wicked things. All the world is shades of gray and goody gum drops who are so sanctimonious in their conviction, well I want to kick their pillars out from under them. So I'm off to read some more...

Yea gods, Sebastion is such a Felix Unger. I expect him to whip out a little cordless dustbuster and start vacuuming up stray werewolf hairs from Fen. More please...

Love it. Sebastian is hilarious; Fen is hot. I really enjoy the cat vs. dog allusions. Sebastian's horror of the hotel room was very entertaining and completely relatable. I am never comfortable in even the nicest ones. I do not care how much money you spend to obtain a room; at some point, in its history, the bed and someone's santorum enjoyed an "intimate process." Worse, the person who issued that unfortunate effluent was fat and hairy, and had moles. I think Sebastion's only reasonable action now is to minimize his contact with the bed by manuvering Fen's body between himself and it.

I loved chapter 7. Sebastian is truly an ungrateful brat. I almost died laughing when he refused to share the bed with Fen half hour after Fen let him drink his blood. Come on Sebastian! I think this gives Fen full permission to punish Sebastian in whatever way he chooses. We will see if they make it out of the bed without anything happening.

You're building the relationship in a very believable way. I'm growing very fond of Sebastian. I like his fastidiousness, it contrasts nicely with his normally messy eating habits His restraint in the shower was really amusing, too.

I´d like to read more :)

Im really enjoying this fic. I love Fen, cant wait for the next chappie x

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The motel room reminds me of a horrible room I got in a Chicago hotel once. The room smelled of smoke and mold and I did not sleep in the bed that night. I paid over a hundred dollars for the privilege too. So very good depiction of a horrible hotel room. I love how the story is going. Fen and Sebastian are getting cuter by the minute. It was kind of Fen to let Sebastian feed, but will he be able to get him to stop? I acn't wait to see.