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Ooh! Sebastian is so falling for Fen. Slowly but surely. Makes me happy. I thought Sebastian reacted really well to Fen's announcement about the full moon. I thought he would freak out. Instead he was more supportive and reassuring ( despite his less confident inner thoughts). I do wonder how things would turn out if Fen should come across Sebastian while in his transformed blood thirsty state. Are they going to have to hide for three nights. That will be quite the challenge. Is there a deserted island in the middle of Berlin?

OMG. This chapter was so hot and so beautiful. You nailed it perfectly. The whole encounter felt perfectly true to character. Sebastian is such a brat for leaving Fen high and dry. I hope Fen was not too disappointed. I think he probably expected something like that. I had to chuckle when Sebastian walked away because no matter how he tries, he will not be able to forget that experience with Fen. I am interested to see how they will handle Fen's transformation. It will be awesome for Sebastian to see Fen in his natural wild state. The story is going so well. I am really loving it.

As long as it's not direct, I'm good. You can't get sunburn through glass.”

oooooh yes you can!!! glass doesnt stop the UV rays... not unless its got the special coating that sunglasses have)
you can get a sunburn in a tent... (the *burnin rays* come right thru the fabric)
even under a tree or in the shade of a building... (from enough reflective light)

Awesome. At least Sebastian is making a little bit of effort. He seems to be warming up to Fen a little bit. I love Sebastian -he is just too cute. I like Fen's promise for later. I can't wait to see what happens.

I love how the sex made Sebastion just explode with cum and insecurity! He keeps too much of both bottled up, so it's no surprise, but it's exciting. He has to confront this now!
Fen is amazingly solid. Just a cool guy. I loved him for letting Sebastion go, and for accepting responsibility for his own blue balls. It's hard to keep your hands off a tease, but it's your choice and you have to man up if they get theirs and then run. Any man who can do that is a stud. Fen=stud.
And at this line the speedometer surged: Leaning [into] him, he angled his neck slowly, until the skin was brushing Sebastian's lips. “Go on,” he murmured, his voice low and husky. “I know you want to.”
This story is a Maserati tonight.

Are Sebastian and Fen refusing to cooperate? Tell them to come back because we miss them. They don't have to do anything until they are ready.

Hell.
That chapter was hot as it! I felt like I was holding Fen's cock for a moment there!
I love the role reversal of the feeding vampire being vulnerable to his prey. I hope its true that Fen can eventually do anything he wants to Sebastion any time he's feeding. Oh, tell me that it's true!
I can understand Sebastian's panic at the idea. It also goes a long way toward explaining his willingness to kill, but not to feed consensually.
Curious to see how Sebastian enjoys Paris.

Oh so hot! I loved this last chapter.It was practically radiating pheremones. Good job on raising the sexual tension even more. Where does Sebastian find his willpower? On the other hand I can see that it is not easy for him to give in. He has been alone for so long that it is hard to expect him to bond with Fen even though Fen did save his life. They do make a hot couple though. Good job with your love scenes. I am actually a big fan of kissing scenes. They add that romantic touch. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Of course I want an vampire mpreg.
I've never read one.
Lets just forget the whole thing about them being dead, not being able to get pregnant, specially male pregnanycy, that they turn ppl not give birth.
I don't care about that, I want my fiction kinky; the only thing that needs to be real with vampire slash is the need-want-take thing.

Woo-hoo!!!!GO slash writers!!!!

Maybe we need new charachters to make sebastian jealous; another new chara after that to make fen jealous.....
That would bring you to 5o k and give us action while we're waiting for sebastian/fen action.
Btw Fen is such a cool name for chara; on my mother tongue it's a short word for a blow drier.
I like it.
I'm gonna fail my degree because I spend all my time reading slash; so lets go down in flames together.
Yeah!

I freaken' love this story!! Well done. I must say I hope that you make them mates...maybe vamps and wolves always mated before because maybe when they bind their souls the wolf gets the lifespan of a vamp but stays a wolf and the vamp can feed from the wolf for eternity....that would be cool. Their species basically is a balance to each other...extream opposites that are helpful to each other. Maybe the reason they now hate the other species is because of a love tryst gone wrong or something...so from then on they could only date within their species and humans and were taught horrible things about the other...that would make sense. Anyways, an idea to think about...since taking blood is so sensual and if they became a couple the feeding and getting hard thing would be and issue even if the wolf was changed....also aging would become an issue. Ooooohh, are you going to make this MPreg by any chance?? I just love it when it happens that's all.....and little vamp puppies would be soooo cute, lol. Well, keep up the great work, I may not write much but I'm reading it now...and am in suspence for more.