rate_review Reviews

Oh that was great and very hot looking for more!

I don't smoke, but I think I need a cigarette. Whew!!!

Do werewolves get blue balls? Just asking.

Amazing! Such an intense love scene. All eyes turn to Sebastian. Is he going to chicken out? I get the feeling he will not but if Sebastian does chicken out, I give Fen permission to eat him the next time Fen changes into a wolf. This is the ultimate cliffhanger! I am hoping that Fen will get some lovin'.

All the best of luck!
I loved this chapter, finally, Sebastian gives it up. From puffed-up fraidy cat to cat-in-heat in 3,2,1. In this and the preceding chapter, you hit a lot of sweet spots-- like Sebastian opening his legs to invite some attention to his hard cock. I could see him on the bed, twitching for it. And this was hot: 'Sebastian was flushed, still panting. His lips were traced with crimson, his cock softening slowly, his chest heaving with every breath. The best part, though? The best part was the fact that Sebastian was fucking /covered/ in his own come.' THANK-YOU for painting him out like a picture.
I thought the ending of this chapter was perfect. Fen is a damn hero. He has no fear. He went for it, though he knew there'd be fall-out. And he's there waiting for it. Probably I'd try to evade it.

He He, I love this story! Really getting into the good stuff now ;) You're almost at the word mark now- keep it up, you're doing great!

What a tease!
This is so delicious, as you can see by my addiction to it.
XoXo

OMG! Please let us really be at that moment! It is about time for Fen to get some action. Hurray! Perhaps not being ripped apart has helped Sebastian to make up his mind a little more about Fen. I think after the night in the warehouse, they both need to let off some steam and find some comfort in each other. I am worried about them going back to that same warehouse. If the slayers tracked them there, more might show up. Especially if they are looking for the ones that got killed. If you have 8000 words to go, I am sure that you will make it. Things are so exciting right now and you are one of the few writers who has stuck with their stories through the end of the month. Good job.

If you don't keep updating this story regularly.....I may kill myself.

On another note of the same topic, this is a fantabulous story. You've manage to put everything I love into one story. A great plot, creatures, great(WONDERFUL) grammr and spelling, and it's not all about the sex.

Don't get me wrong...I love stories with sex....but not stories based on it. I love the build up.

Oh geeze...I'm gonna gonna go crazy waiting for the next chapter.

Evil Cliffy! Evil, evvvvviiiilllll. I really liked chapter 17 - the carnage and the fear. You conveyed the horror of watching everything clearly and being unable to tear your eyes away. This self sacrificing side of Sebastian makes up for his overtly anal fussiness. Noble vampire indeed.

*Waving my pompoms for you! You still have two days till the deadline. Think of it as only 14 more pages. Go! Go! Go!. Oooh and if those 14 pages are werewolf vampire smexiness, all the better!*

Kiix

Oh no you can't leave it like that more please!