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August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was worried that Theo and Hendrick would get captured. I hope they have the strength to deal with their kidnappers. I know Theo is a fast healer but I hope they take care of his injuries. Poor Theo is the uke and the one getting beat up. No fair.
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August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice love scene. I like the way each of the characters have special gifts.
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August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Theo got beat up. It sounds like some big change is about to happen. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so sweet. I love the way that their memories are coming back to them. The flashback when Hezekiah was sick and sitting on the floor almost made me cry. It was such a sweet and sad memory. Keep up the good writing Vanyr. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter. I liked all of Theo's brothers. I can just picture mamoru kissing all the boys on the top of the head. That scene made me laugh. Theo is a very cute character. Even though Hendrick is younger, he seems to be more dominant. I can't wait to read more.
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July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Very exciting start. Plus it has Wiggy and Mamo as guest stars. I can't wait to see Theo's family.