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I'm happy you didn't abandon this fic as I really liked it. I was so happy when I saw that you had updated!
Hope you don't wait long for the next chapter as I'm dieing to find out how it goes!! :)

Keep it up.

interesting story - wonder why they didn't try to work out words for objects - hope they get back together....

Oh no, don't stop now! Evil cliffhanger... and poor Muranthen! I do hope Alex and him can find each other again - and actually how can Alex be sure that the dark space will really lead him to his world? Although I can understand his reasons for leaving. I really like your story and hope you'll continue it. Sascha is very cute too. I love cats so yay for her and a world of cat-men! I'm also very glad to find a good mpreg story, since I like them even though they are not always well received... Anyway, thank you for this story, I can't wait to see what will happen next!

AHHHHH you must write more nowww!!!!!!! ug i hate cliffhangers. i'm too impatient and this story is to good!!!

Hey, I really liked this, and I'm really happy I read through the first chapter and got to the other two. I like MPreg too, so I'm hoping you update soon!

i love ur story and im very sad that you left it like this the three chapters looks lonely and they need more company(chapters)
ur story was like a fresh breath of air
it was fun
pllllllllllllllllllllllz i beg u post another chapter
even if it was a tiny one at least i well know that u r there

Hi, I've enjoyed reading the 3 available chapters but may I ask a favor?
It's a small thing to you, but it would really make my reading a lot more enjoyable.

Please do no use long lines to separate parts (________ or ******* or any other long string of characters without spaces). Short lines are OK but long lines makes reading really uncomfortable.
It's not the lines themselves (they look good) is how the web browsers behaves because of them.
The browser doesn´t breaks lines to fit the window/screen size unless there are spaces between characters. Which means page width will be, no matter what, as long as the lines you use as separation. Which in turn makes text lines as long as the separation lines.
Not everyone is on the same screen size or reads in the same character size. The separating lines looks good and probably harmless to you, but to anyone on a smaller screen/window or using bigger font size, they are a nightmare. Lines that long forces me to use smaller text size (uncomfortable and very bad for the eyes) to see the full line without having to scroll left and right like crazy.
So, if you could use shorter lines, it'll really make a big difference. I don't ask you to get rid of them, just to make them shorter. I don't want to drop the story because of such a silly thing, but it's happened to me before and after a while I always end up not reading anymore just to avoid the whole problem.

I know it may be a weird request and I understand if you think it's way too silly to actually do it. But still, since I did enjoy the story I thought I'll rather ask than directly dismiss the story. I want to know what'll happen. Will Alex be back in his world? Is Alex pregnant? HOW will Alex react if he finds himself back in his world, pregnant and on top of that expecting kitties? =DDDDD

What? WAAH! How could Alex just leave like that?b I guess if I was stuck in a strange world, I might also jump at the chance to go home. However if I had a hunk like Murranthen by my side kissing me and making love to me, I would let the real world wait for a while. Who wants to wake up when you are having such a nice dream?

Poor Murranthen. He was probably bringing his new mate home for everyone to see and then the mate ran away! I can just see his kitty ears drooping.

What? What? It is so good. More please