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Poor Axel. D;
Hope this gets updated again soon! I do love it so far!

This is a really amazing story, I do hoe you are continuing it and such. I'm curious as to what shall happen nex and I think I may die if its left at this point. Please do continue.

I think you managed to describe a panic attack quite well. I've only had some minor ones, at least I think they were minor... oh well. As I've experienced, t first you just think about this thing making you upset, shocked, whatever the catalyst. Soon you begin to shake, after that tears, curl up if possible, zone out, hyperventilation, vision starts to fade and then it feels as if you can't breathe. When it gets to the last point and you're concious about the change you just think "I need to calm down, I can't breathe.." repeat that ten times faster inside your head for some seconds and it feels like an eternity. Often you lose the grip on what's going on around you, can't hear others speak, or sometimes hear them but can't understand what they say. I hope this was of any help :)
Keep writing! :)

Yay,another chapter - with Sascha showing up too! Thank you!
I do feel worse and worse for poor Jamie, though - when is Alex finally going to talk to him? He does seem like he's leading him on, and Jamie doesn't deserve that. Will you find another man for Jamie?
And we finally see the meeting with the guy from the forum - not pregnant, but I guess it can't work for everyone... ;) Although I don't really understand how that Matt actually got all these information; was he able to understand the language somehow? Or did he meet someone from that world who spoke the 'human' language (is that the 'trader' you mentioned)? Well at least now Alex is aware of his condition, and maybe the other guy can help him go back? Alex certainly can't have his baby in his own world...
Also, I still wonder if Alex and Muranthen are soulmates, because Muranthen jumped Alex the first time he saw him, before marking him. And is the 'depression' Alex is feeling linked to his mark and the time difference with the other world (like, he feels Muranthen's absence as if he had been separated from him for as long as in Muranthen's world, instead of just the few weeks in his own world - if that makes any sense)?
More questions for you, and yes, some people do read the author's replies (at least I do). :) Muranthen in the next chapter...?

This is really interesting. Magic, fantasy, and a good read!
I want to know more about the magic-hopefully you can get to that at some point. How did Matt learn the language?

Update ! ^^
He's pregnant !! I knew it !
Can't wait for more...

Uh-Oh. Alex is in trouble now. I think you did a very good job describing the panic attack. The "I'm pregnant for someone else" confession is going to be one hell of a break up line to deliver to Jamie. I hope Alex and this new guy can come up with some way to return to Muranthen's world. It also sounds like this new guy understands how to communicate with the cat people. I think he can teach Alex a lot to prepare for life in that other world. I read the replies in the forum. I don't sign into the forum as frequently though. Love this new chapter.

Really liking the story!

i loooooooooooooove your story it's very intersting and addictive and i want to say please you completed
90% done) of the story soo post another chapter i want to know when alex is going back to the cat world and muranthen

btw .i panic attack it's hard to breath

Dinavora, I demand u continue this story! The black hole that opens a gateway in space time dimension is very interesting. I would love the read more.