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for Into the Dark

by Divanora

schedule July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I can already tell this is going to be one of my favorite stories EVER! I love your style of writing and your story is just the kind that I love to read! I'll definitely be looking for your next update!!!!
schedule July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far keep it going and screw anyone who has a problem with it. they shouldn't read it then.
schedule July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, fascinating~ This is promising to be a good read already. I can feel it in my bones P= Loving the suspense. (But of course, I'll love it even more if you let us readers know sooooon what happens after said suspense) Can't wait for more~
person Sheireen
schedule July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning!
Hope you will continue this, because it sounds like a very interesting concept.
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
it looks like he'll be standing jamie up... poor kid... :( make it up to him?
ASOTA
person jyanx
schedule July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your introduction to the story, it's a great beginning and I can't wait to see how it develops. You did a wonderful job introducing your main character, and he seems interesting, and someone I would probably get a long with.

As for the books, those must be Mercedes Lackey's Magics Pawn, Magic's Promise, and Magic's Price. I love these books, and have read them many times since I first found them years ago in high school.
schedule July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my poor Alex just as he got himself a date he falls into a black hole oh well that would be an intersting excuse. hehe I actually am quiet fond of mpreg I always find it interesting how different authors aproach the subject I wrtie it myself and may include it in my latest story... but anyways I'm completely at a loss as to what series it could be the last semi mainstream gay novel series I read was something rainbow boys hehe but that was quiet awhile ago. Although I'm defiently interested now in this series? Well I can't wait till you update this. ~Bliss
person Heather
schedule July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sounding great so far, looking forward to updates. FYI love MPreg, was so happy to see this.
person kylee123
schedule July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I was not expecting that ending. What on earth is going on in Alex's apartment. Plus he just got himself a date! I can't guess the book though. Very interesting start.
schedule July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good start, tho I can't say that I'm fond of the cliffy lol :P I like mpreg stories if they're handled tastefully enough and most people handle it very well. I'm looking forward to the next update!

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