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Wait, I'm confused; who's Nathan? Is that Parker's first name? I thought Parker was his first name. Oh well. On to my comments: Jesus, what a fantastic chapter! I was at the edge of my seat, ready to fly thru the computer and grab that smarmy Brit and toss him into oblivion!

How Colton restrained himself is beyond me. Unfortunately, I'm a very jealous person and I couldn't take all Smyth's come-ons as well as Colton did. I would have been right in his face grabbing him off of Marc! What an ass! And to knock on Marc's door that night and the next night, not to even wait for an answer, he just walks in?????? Omg. Why the heck didn't they lock the door? lol

Well, thank God that shoot is over. Shit, what a prick. I'm so glad I don't have to read about him again. Leave Colton and Marc to their wonderful relationship. They care for each other way more than they realize.

I don't remember if I mentioned this in an earlier review, but your writing is phenomenal. The chapters flow so nicely and your descriptions and the pace of your writing is magnificant. Even reading the smut is like reading, I want to say Shakespeare, but he's too hard to read! Reading your story is like drinking a fine wine; you want to take it slow so it doesn't run out. I don't know. What I'm trying to convey here, is that your writing is wonderful, eloquent, just beautiful. Ok maybe now you'll understand what the fuck I'm trying to say. See, my writing definitely needs work! Which is why I'm not a writer! lol

Well, I can't wait for the next chapter. Great job on this one!

"Fed him one whimper after another"
your so brilliantly brilliant @ writing smut, loved it!

Excellent story. I really enjoyed reading it. I love the idea of the matching tattoos

Wow, Colton's getting pretty emotional; wonder how Marc's gonna take it. Moving in already?

Good story, will there be another chapter? I noticed you wrote complete in your summary.

When I wrote Over-Exposure, it was intended to be a one shot in response to a photo challenge writing group I started on FaceBook. The next photo meshed with some comments from the previous story. So I wrote The Looking Glass with the same characters. Several months take place between the two stories. Next week's photo challenge also meshes, so I am working on a third story. Once again some time has taken place between the stories. I guess you could consider them to be photographs, instead of video, of their life. I'm not sure how long they story will run, but I probably won't be adding a story a week in the future. The rest of the inspiration photos won't work for them. So I will say that I like them and if I can I will continue their story.

If you are on FB, look me up. Kei Chan or Kei--chan@hotmail.com. The group is called Inspired Writing.

Hey Kei-chan!

I'll have to check out facebook; I have an acct., but am rarely on. I didn't know you are allowed to write stories on there, like on here. :)

I knew there was some time that passed between the first chapter and second chapters. Your stor is so well written and your writing is so eloquent, it doesn't seem like I'm reading smut! lol

I'll check out facebook, tho, thanks!

Lisa