rate_review Reviews

I severely don't like the mom. Severely.
And Mika, don't hate your name! It's pretty.

I like how this story flows, though Ryan makes me nervous. Mika is likable and counters what nerves Ryan gives me. Please continue it's good.

I am Hooked....and anyone who is hooked on a good story...well needless to say I want more. This is brilliant and I can't wait for more and please keep it going please

I like how this is going and I'm excited to see what will happen next! What will poor Mika do?!

Verrrry nice! I can't wait for the next chapter!

It's a good idea, I liked it, but it has a lot of grammar mistakes You should definitely check it.

God! I had a whole review and it didn't take. Ok, Reader's Digest version: This is an interesting premise to the story; about Ryan blackmailing poor Mika. I CANNOT BELIEVE Mika's mother and I use the term "mother" very loosely. She leaves her only child FOR A MONTH???????? No parental supervision? Where's her sensee of responsibilty? This is her CHILD for Christ's sakes! She goes on a cruise FOR A FUCKING MONTH?????? Jeez, I wish I could do that!!!

Anyway, there are a few misspelled words: starring instead of staring, wine instead of whine, and a few times you switched from past to present tense. Other than that, it was a good chapter.

I'm looking forward to the next one!