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August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would be kind of freaked out if I was Evan and I woke up for the second time in a strange position. Msybe he should lay off the drinking. Unless someone is slipping him something.
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August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You would have thought that the second night they wouldn't end up in bed with each other, Oh well I guess some people never learn.
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August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I'm dying to know how they Evan and Logan wind up getting in these situations? Who starts it? And omg, Evan fell asleep with his hand on Logan's you-know-what!!!!! That's too funny!!!!
I wish they'd go under hypnosis, or better yet, have someone record the party so I'd know exactly WHAT happened!!! lol
Well, there should be another party this same night, so I'm hoping for the best! Maybe this time they'll wake up and Evan's you-know-what will be up Logan's butt! hahahah Now THAT would be funny!!
I wish they'd go under hypnosis, or better yet, have someone record the party so I'd know exactly WHAT happened!!! lol
Well, there should be another party this same night, so I'm hoping for the best! Maybe this time they'll wake up and Evan's you-know-what will be up Logan's butt! hahahah Now THAT would be funny!!
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August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and I forgot to say that I really feel bad for Evan. I mean, I'd be jealous of Logan too. It seems that Logan just pretty much took his place as Gabe's best friend. I can feel Evan's pain and jealousy. Truthfully, I think Gabe's being a bit of an ass. If my best friend left for the summer and this guy moved in next door to me, you better believe that I would NEVER forget my best friend!! Anyway, I know guys are different; their sensitivity chips need to be re-configured!
Anyway, can't wait to find out which position they wind up at the next party! hahah
Anyway, can't wait to find out which position they wind up at the next party! hahah
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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start. Logan sounds like such a sweetheart that I love him already. I imagine that Evan is mega freaking out. I can't wait to read more.
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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First and foremost...I LOOOOOVE the title. That's pretty much a no brainer. It's what drew me to the story in the first place. Gabe is adorable! I actually want him with Evan....but we'll see how that goes. Logan isn't that bad...though his characterization isn't what you'd call stereotypical. I like that by the way. Speaking of your main character, I like how straightforward he is about everything, nonchalant and pretty much just a guy. It's kinda cute and definitely amusing. So did Evan not consider himself gay before sleeping with Logan? This line seemed off: "And my hand was on their ass….and they were definitely male???" Anyway, it was a good first chapter. I don't know what you mean by it didn't flow. I thought it was a good pace. You didn't go overboard on trivial details...it was straightforward, once again. I can't see why Evan is that hurt with Gabe being friends with Logan...yeah, they did stuff only the two of them do, but he's not ignoring Evan. Anyway, on to the next chapter. Maybe some questions will be answered
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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh...there isn't another chapter. I thought there was lol. Anyway, I like what you have so far and I'm excited for your next update! :)
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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your stories... highschool stories are always so cliched and enjoyable, and you make them wonderful and engaging! I can't wait to see this unfold
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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it already! But I already knew I would! I loved the last line, you never forget your first. Of course Gabe was talking about hangovers, but by the look on Gabe's face, I think it meant more! haha
Great start to another story! I can't wait to find out exactly what happened between Logan and Evan (who sounds dreamy, btw).
Great start to another story! I can't wait to find out exactly what happened between Logan and Evan (who sounds dreamy, btw).
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG Liz!!!! You just made my whole day! Well, tomorrow's whole day! Just noticed this new story up there and can't wait to read it! I hope you still continue w/your other most awesome stories, including the ones you haven't updated recently, Second Fiddle, and I'm Not Cheering For You. I really love those also!
Anyway, I can't wait to read it in the a.m.!
Anyway, I can't wait to read it in the a.m.!