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August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was SO hot! More please!
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July 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cute story. Amazing how Christian passes for a girl. I was confused tho when he goes into class. I know Mark has a class with him; how about the others? Doesn't the teacher take attendance? Doesn't she call Christian's name out? Just curious.
I noticed a few errors here and there; a few misspellings, a few tense changes. Your most of the time in the chapters should have been you're, non is none, boothe is booth, little things like that.
Other than that, it's a great story! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
I noticed a few errors here and there; a few misspellings, a few tense changes. Your most of the time in the chapters should have been you're, non is none, boothe is booth, little things like that.
Other than that, it's a great story! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
whoa hot chapter! update soon! chapter two was lil bit hard to read