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March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
...My gosh you are mean with that little tidbit at the end... Please let it be a threesome!!!
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March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hahaahh, I KNEW it!!!!!!! His dreams are gonna come true; lol!!!!!!! :):)
But on a more sombre note: this was a very emotionally charged chapter. It brought back a lot of painful memories from when I buried my dad. I was only a year older than Alex. And I could have NEVER gone up there and said anything. Alex is very lucky to have such a great support system.
I also agree w/Carlos that Alex needs to let off some steam now and maybe vent a bit. Not sure if getting wasted is the way to go, but then there wouldn't be a story, lol. I am looking forward to them all getting drunk! hahah
Great chapter! I CANNOT WAIT for the next one! :)
But on a more sombre note: this was a very emotionally charged chapter. It brought back a lot of painful memories from when I buried my dad. I was only a year older than Alex. And I could have NEVER gone up there and said anything. Alex is very lucky to have such a great support system.
I also agree w/Carlos that Alex needs to let off some steam now and maybe vent a bit. Not sure if getting wasted is the way to go, but then there wouldn't be a story, lol. I am looking forward to them all getting drunk! hahah
Great chapter! I CANNOT WAIT for the next one! :)
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February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'll tell you: Justin better not break up w/Alex over something so stupid as Alex being a pimp for Carlos, ne, Alejandro! lol But seriously, it's not like ALEX is the one screwing every Mary, Jane and Lois. hahaha
I love Erik; he's so cute! Looking at Rufus and Alex, trying to figure out how they're related! lol
Awesome chapter! I'm feeling really bad for Alex, but surprisingly for his mom too. Hearing her side of the story, where his dad wouldn't let her visit Alex, I feel bad for her. I do understand his dad's reasoning behind it, but Alex did need a mother, so I'm kinda on the fence about it. I do hope they can work things out; Alex needs all the support he can get right now.
Which brings me to my first point: Justin better not break Alex's heart now. Not when they just found each other and Alex went thru this horrible trajedy; he needs Justin now more than ever.
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
I love Erik; he's so cute! Looking at Rufus and Alex, trying to figure out how they're related! lol
Awesome chapter! I'm feeling really bad for Alex, but surprisingly for his mom too. Hearing her side of the story, where his dad wouldn't let her visit Alex, I feel bad for her. I do understand his dad's reasoning behind it, but Alex did need a mother, so I'm kinda on the fence about it. I do hope they can work things out; Alex needs all the support he can get right now.
Which brings me to my first point: Justin better not break Alex's heart now. Not when they just found each other and Alex went thru this horrible trajedy; he needs Justin now more than ever.
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a great chapter. I'm glad alex and his dad got everything out into the open before this. Really, really good
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February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg, I can't believe Alex's dad had a fatal heart attack! Poor Alex! What will he do? Where will he live? With Uncle Rufus? Justin, Carlos? I feel so bad for him. This really hit home for me. I was just a year older than Alex when my dad died of a massive coronary. But Alex doesn't have a mother to take care of him. What will happen to him? I wonder if his dad had any life insurance; Alex could at least use that to pay off Rossini....
Great chapter, even tho is was painfully tragic. I'm glad though that Carlos is ready to step up to the plate and be there for Alex. I'm sure Justin will be there also.
Great chapter, even tho is was painfully tragic. I'm glad though that Carlos is ready to step up to the plate and be there for Alex. I'm sure Justin will be there also.
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January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well that was really interesting..... NO that was freaking awesome what a great way to get alex out into the open. Keep them coming, hopefully things don't hit the fan too much later
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January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, the ending was so sweet; I can see how Alex is falling head over heels for Justin. And he shouldn't overthink this moving to NYC together stuff. Sure, they've only known each other for a week, but they have the whole year to be in a relationship, and who knows, by the time six months rolls around, Alex may be sure that moving w/Justin is the right thing to do. And I'm so, so proud of him for coming out at the game! :)
Now, on to the game! Jesus Christ; if I knew reading about football would be so exciting, I might actually WATCH it! hahah, ok, I'm getting carried away...lol. But seriously, reading about that game was pretty awesome; that play Chris thought of was amazing, and of course Carlos and Peter pulling the whole thing off was terrific! And kudos to Chris for even thinking of it! :)
Great chapter; so exciting and intense! Can't wait for the next one!:)
Now, on to the game! Jesus Christ; if I knew reading about football would be so exciting, I might actually WATCH it! hahah, ok, I'm getting carried away...lol. But seriously, reading about that game was pretty awesome; that play Chris thought of was amazing, and of course Carlos and Peter pulling the whole thing off was terrific! And kudos to Chris for even thinking of it! :)
Great chapter; so exciting and intense! Can't wait for the next one!:)
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January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty sweet of Justin to want Alex with him in NYC. And even sweeter that he said he might not even go there b/c of how he feels for Alex.
So, I was ROFL when I read that Eve knew all about the party and the contest! Just thinking about her and her husband watching the tapes from ALL the cameras! Omg! And she kept all the ones w/Carlos, hahah, that was funny!
Awesome chapter; can't wait for the next one! :)
So, I was ROFL when I read that Eve knew all about the party and the contest! Just thinking about her and her husband watching the tapes from ALL the cameras! Omg! And she kept all the ones w/Carlos, hahah, that was funny!
Awesome chapter; can't wait for the next one! :)
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January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow. that chapter... was just...wow. Impressive. I cant wait for more.
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December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, poor Carlos! Having to have sex with his MILF fantasy mom!!! hahahha But I can see how that would be really weird; for both of them!
I can also see how doing this job, your morals can totally shift. I guess there's a fine line between right and wrong, ethical and non-ethical.
At least Carlos can admit that when he flips his switch on to Alejandro, he doesn't know if he'll be able to switch it back. That's pretty scary.
I can't wait to read more! :)
I can also see how doing this job, your morals can totally shift. I guess there's a fine line between right and wrong, ethical and non-ethical.
At least Carlos can admit that when he flips his switch on to Alejandro, he doesn't know if he'll be able to switch it back. That's pretty scary.
I can't wait to read more! :)