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May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, oblivious little Alex 8D Carlos is definitely HINTING at something, isn't he. Ohohoho, I SUPPORT.
Justin's Hyde is quite crazy. I like.
But I still like Carlos a lot more 8D
Justin's Hyde is quite crazy. I like.
But I still like Carlos a lot more 8D
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May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter really showed how versatile the boys are. And I don't know why but that violent sex between Alex and Justin was...OMB no words can describe the effect.
Also is Miguel going to help out in the business?
Anyway looking forward to the next chapter. Also your translation were a little weird.
Also is Miguel going to help out in the business?
Anyway looking forward to the next chapter. Also your translation were a little weird.
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May 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg, poor Alex; he's pretty much screwed now. Justin is NOT gonna be happy about this new development. Rossini blackmailing Alex; what a shit. What happens to college now? I can see Carlos wanting to continue, as long as he knows he can't get hurt and is protected by Rossini. Although, I think his pride will get in the way. I know he would want to continue, but not with Rossini; he doesn't want to "owe" anyone anything; he's too proud. He wouldn't want to feel obligated to Rossini for anything.
I can kinda see Chris wanting to be a part of this. lol Idk, it really sucks. I feel so bad for Alex.
Great chapter, as usual! Can't wait for more! :)
I can kinda see Chris wanting to be a part of this. lol Idk, it really sucks. I feel so bad for Alex.
Great chapter, as usual! Can't wait for more! :)
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May 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
;O OMFG. You, sir, are a genius.
So many twists, oh I love it.
Can't wait for the next chappie!!!!!
So many twists, oh I love it.
Can't wait for the next chappie!!!!!
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that last chapter was absolutly mind blowing i want to read more please continue your writings you can definitely go places with how well your writing is.
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April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hello dear author i hope that you are going to continue to write on this story i do not know about others but i am on pins and needles to read the continuation of this story supply and demand my email was assigned to me so do not be alarmed by it
thank you
sincerely
Matthew t H
thank you
sincerely
Matthew t H
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi,this is my first review of this story. I'm in love with it! all the characters seem believable especially Alex. I also love justin , he's very sweet and supportive. PLEASE I really don't want to see Justin and Alex break up so soon... I think a love triangle sounds fantastic but then you should lengthen your story with lots of heart breaks, confusions, cheating, lying, ...
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH my God how could you do that to me? End such an awesome chapter so suddenly! Please please please update soon!
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March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so that was bloody hot. But Carlos' sudden feelings for alex and out of the blue attraction for justin seems not very believable. Yes theyr drunk, but there seems to be a lot of rational thinking in their heads, and schizophrenic conversations in carlos' head that tells the reader theyr certainly aware of their actions. The whole thing does seem slightly far fetched, hw justin allows carlos to fondle alex but not fuck him. Yet it's ok for him to get fucked...
Having said that, this was by far my favourite chapter, things are getting hot n moving to the direction we've all been anticipating.
Although I wanted carlos n alex together at the start of the story, I nw really like justin, n don't want carlos to come inbetween them.
Having said that, this was by far my favourite chapter, things are getting hot n moving to the direction we've all been anticipating.
Although I wanted carlos n alex together at the start of the story, I nw really like justin, n don't want carlos to come inbetween them.
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March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP!!!! You are one mean, but talented author!!!! To leave us (your poor, frantic readers) waiting with bated breath for the next chappie! Well, ok, maybe it's just me who's waiting with bated breath! lol
Awesome chapter! It was funny to see Carlos pretty much do a 360 where his "straightness" is concerned! He's tipping that Kinsey scale over! lol They may have to make up a new number just for him! Something like, 45%=only gay for my best friend and his b/f! hahah
Anyway, great job, and as I said before, still waiting anxiously for the next one! :)
Awesome chapter! It was funny to see Carlos pretty much do a 360 where his "straightness" is concerned! He's tipping that Kinsey scale over! lol They may have to make up a new number just for him! Something like, 45%=only gay for my best friend and his b/f! hahah
Anyway, great job, and as I said before, still waiting anxiously for the next one! :)