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for Supply and Demand

by fusedtwilight

person roriette
schedule September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohno. That's...eff you Rossini. ;<
I hope the boys don't get into TOO deep shit.
And I hope the guy gets killed soon.
person Lisa
schedule September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Shit, this Rossini guys is such bad news. This party does not like it's gonna fare well for Alex and the boys. Omg, I just remembered something you wrote me. Now I have a really bad feeling...I hope I'm wrong.

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter! :)
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! Finally!! Lovely chapter, full or warm fuzzies! Evil, evil last line though!!! Great work!
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit!!!! I can't believe you left us with this cliffie!!!! Bad, bad author! :(

Something's gonna happen with Carlos or Justin? Omg, no................I love both these boys. Shit. Now I have to wait. I hate waiting, you know! :(

And just when Alex had finally admitted to himself, Carlos AND Justin that he wanted Carlos. Now he's gonna lose one of them. I can't take it. Too much anxiety! lol

Awesome chapter! I will be waiting with bated breath for the next one.....:)
person Lisa
schedule August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ha! So funny with Chris and Carlos! I actually never realized that Chris and his mom could meet on a job! lol Of course I know Alex would NEVER set Chris up with his own mom (ewwwwww), but if it's like multiple women and the guys, it could happen. Can you say awkward? lol

Glad Chris and Carlos patched things up!

I also thought the whole dream thing with Carlos/Alejandro/Alex was pretty cool. Alejandro meaning Alex in Espanol. I never thought of that! Hmmm, I wonder if that dream is a foreshadowing of things to come for Alex and Carlos. That they were meant to be together.

I was proud of Alex for getting in Carlos' face about Chris and telling the guys what they were up to. Also for putting Carlos and Chris in their places. He's proving that he can definitely be a leader, and not just some kid playing a grown up game of "the leader of the whorehouse", lol!

Can't wait for more! :)
person me
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so I've been reading this story pretty much since it started and this is the first time I've felt compelled to review. mainly because I was remarking out loud and my boyfriend wanted to know what was pissing me off so much haha. first of all, great twist. I saw it coming when Carlos was like... I don't know what made me open my mouth. but chris. the first thought I had was, his mom is one of Alex's clients. what if she's at that party? second thought was, wow, this is getting big. then, after reading all the lemons in the different points of view (very confusing by the way with all the fake names and stuff haha) was that Chris is so totally going to fuck over some client of Alex because of his HUGE ego. Chris should NOT be hired by Alex (although if he isn't he'll blow the whistle but then... wait. maybe then rossini can kill him and I'll be happy cuz that egotistical poophead will be gone, but.... that's YOUR choice as author *wink*) anyhoo, I did kind of like the way you foreshadowed something happening between Caroline and Peter. I really hope poor Caroline does find someone who loves her and will take care of her and not cheat on a secretary. but Chris. not happy about that at all. he's going to fuck something up. I know he will. I'll just be waiting.

but... it's a great story. I do enjoy reading it and I get happy whenever I see that there's been an update. keep it up. I look forward to the next installment.
person Roriette
schedule July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
DAMN.
that...is all I've got left.
I can barely think.
That was a HUGE GIGANTIC LOAD of yum.
I love everything, the fat chapter, the fat lemon, and the fat plot building. Love it.
AND HAPPY ONE YEAR BELATED ANNI!!!!!
schedule July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay Thor! He's a man now! lol

I loved the fact that all the friends were cheering for each other. And the whole auction thing was really cool; what an awesome idea! And they made tons and tons of money; unbelievable that a virgin was autctioned off at 15 grand was it? Omfl, what I would do with 15K (NOT spend it on virgins! lol)

Awesome chapter. I think Carlos and Justin are fucking crazy if they try to carry out their idea of killing Rossini. They'll wind up in the slammer or worse, and where will that leave our poor hero Alex?

Well, I am sure those boys will be kept busy for the rest of the summer; they'll be making tons of dough w/all those rich horny ladies! lol Instead of Ladies who Lunch, these are the Ladies who Fuck. :)

Looking forward to more!
person Lisa
schedule July 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes, in honor of "Supply and Demand's" one year anniversary, we get a big orgy to read about! lol :)

I'm surprised, but not so surprised that Carlos just let everything out of the bag. On one hand it's good, Alex will be making more money, but on the other hand, I think it's way too risky that Carlos's friends are in on it. Too many people know what's going on, too many loose lips can talk; who knows who will find out next?

Awesome chapter, as usual! Can't wait for the next one! lol
person Kathleen
schedule July 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am not one to particularly read slash. When i initially read through the summary never thought i would read it because i assumed the whole thing was slash. Well i was most definitely wrong. This story is so awesome. I feel so connected with the characters. I relate to these characters so well. I did notice in a few chapters to ad similar line very close together. Just something to keep in mind for future chapters.I am so happy that i decided to open up my mind a bit, because,what i assumed would be a slash, was actually both hetero and slash. Thank you so much for writing this awesome story. I eagerly await more.

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