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Ok, seriously. You need a disclaimer at the beginning of this chapter stating: Warning! Reading this chapter will induce extreme sadness and break your wallet, as you will need to stock up on Kleenex.

So I ran out of my Kleenex and had to resort to paper towels. Just not the same thing....

Poor, poor Alex. He just lost his dad and now he lost his beloved Justin. He is not going to be in a good way. I hope Carlos is there for him; he will definitely need someone to turn to.

I'm heartbroken for him and for Justin's family. He loved life, he loved Alex so much. He was willing to give up Columbia for Alex. Who does that?

I wonder why he didn't tell Carlos or Jess it was Raoul. (is that how it's spelled? I forgot, sorry.) When/if Carlos finds out, he's gonna go after him big time. And he better catch him, b/c we know that Carlos is next on his hit list.

This was such an emotional chapter, minus Brandon's roofie thing. lol

I just want to go up to Alex and hug him.

This new mysterious Chicago guy is weird, but I'm glad he is helping. They need all the help they can get. I have a bad feeling that Justin will be involved in the upcoming tragedy....I really hope not, I like Justin....please update soon!

Now that was interesting. Miguel has some serious nads to be putting everything on the line. I have a feeling this isnt gonna end rossni but all dictators get their ends sooner or later

Oh man, the banter between Alex and Miguel was priceless!

And now,ha!Erik knows! And Rufus and ma ma are dating! lol Too funny! :)

I still think this whole killing Rossini and Raoul plan is whacked! I think it's way too dangerous.

It's good that they decided on a safe place to go and a safe word (or phrase). Hopefully they won't need it.

Awesome chapter, as usual! :)

haha, I'm glad Alex got a laugh, God knows he deserves it. Alex is pretty awesome, especially in this chapter. I wonder how Miguel's gang will handle "prostitution lesson" lol. I can't wait for the next update!

Poor Alex, I would be freaking out, too. God, killing a crime lord with so much power is terrifying, I wouldn't put it past him to keep survelince equipment in the homes of all his workers. And don't even get me started on Raoul...he fucking enjoyed the emotional trauma he infliced on that maid! What a creepy freak. Haha, I am so addicted to this story, I can't wait for the next update. I want to know what the plan is and how it turns out. I want to know what happens with Chris' bad attitude. I want to know what will happen with the Carlos/Alex/Justin relationship. I want to know what will happen with the baby, and who the father is! So much is leaving me hanging! Please update again!

Ha! I LOVED the angry Alex! Go get 'em tiger! lol

Also, I think Miguel, Carlos, Justin and now Alex are totally BONKERS!!!! Hatching a plan to off Rossini and Raoul is CRAZY! Something's gotta go wrong; I don't care how many guys Miguel knows! Something's gonna happen and I'm worried about these guys. :(

Miguel lied! But that also means he can't give Carlos any shit for lieing, either. As this killing plan gets more developed, I am getting a bigger and bigger feeling that this plan will be very bad news for Alex. By the way, I love the rivalry/friendship Carlos and Justin has. It is beautifully written. And the sex with Alex is just plain hot XP. and since it is the last update of the year, Merry Belated (insert holiday of your choice) and Happy New Year!

So I cried when HH died. So sad; I really grew to love his character. And I totally believe in reincarnation, so I could definitely see Carlos and Alex as HH and Alejandro!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see how Carlos goes all apeshit on Miguel's ass for lying to them about being in a gang.

And hey, what's with Carlos not taking a shower after his wham, bam, thank you Alex screw? Then he just stuck it in Justin....so much for hygiene! lol hahah

Happy New Year to you too Fused! :)

I'm really enjoying the story....kinda of reminds me of the show Hung....but I must say I'm a bit offeneded. When u wrote that renee had a softness and smoothness to her skin that proved that she had white in her blood....threw me off. I'm sorry, I just wasn't aware that only white ppl were blessed to have a "softness" and "smoothness" to their skin.....I wasn't aware that a blackj person could not have soft features or soft and smooth skin without being mixed? I mean what type of fucked up logic is that? (Excuse me language). That's like me saying that someone had a beautiful smile which showed that they have black in them...it's ignorant.
Listen I get that carlos isn't the most openminded what with the whole fearing rufus b/c he's black, or when alex was getting mugged he kept saying "the black man did this..." or "the black man did that..." (we get it he's black).......but for him to be ethnic himself u would think that he wouldn't be sooo closeminded. I'm not sure if that is just the way u want carlos's character to be or if u truly share the same closemined and ignorant views...either way it is totally ruining a perfectly good story for me :(