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I am surprised Alex isn't more mad at Carlos for lying to him about taking heat...and the gross amount of cheating. I look forward to the next chapter!

I can't believe Carlos. Getting hooked on Heat. What an ass. AND he's not using protection! He's going against everything he told his workers. AND HE'S CHEATING ON ALEX!!!!!! Now I'm doubly pissed at him.

And WTF is Caroline thinking; getting knocked up at her age???? She should abort!!!! But you already know my feelings on that! Putting her baby's life as well as her life in danger. Too many things can go wrong.

I'm glad Alex was enjoying his time with his mom and his new family. I'm sorry that he has to leave before he's ready. But this only proves how much he loves Carlos; he's gonna come home and set that boy straight. No pun intended. lol

Great chapter as always Fused! :)

wow... I don't know what to say. I few days ago I stumbled up on this story and it's just 'wow'. Really intense making me continue reading deep into the night (usually I'm very strict with myself during the week go to bed early but you made me read till 2am.) I gave you a +++++, but this story deservse a 15+, it's way better then the regular stuff I read.
I liked how the chracter developed from 'normal' to what they are now, how you have diffrent person and plot lines coming into play. It's great!!! Thanks for this story and keep writing I can't wait for an update.
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Oh shit, this is not a good thing. The only possibly goo thing that could come out of this is that Carlos will eventually get an immunity to the drug...which probably ins't possible with only 5 pills. He is such a dumb ass.

Carlos you stupid idiot! I just wanna smack him upside his stupid head! What the hell is he doing? He knows how bad Heat is! Jesus Christ am I pissed at him!

Alex is gonna come home and Carlos will be all strung out on Heat. Idiot.

And Alex; poor Alex. He had to have that intervention. He had to know that Justin would never have wanted to see him like this. Justin would only want him to be happy. I hope he can get the rest he needs with his mom. At least he'll get to meet his half-siblings. :)

Great chapter as usual! :)

I'm addicted, long time reader. But when are we getting an update!? I'm dying over here...

Damn you fused! I'm STILL crying over poor Justin! :(

So Alex realizes it was that fucker Raoul. Shit. Now we learn Raoul has a brother. Probably just as fucked up as he is and their father. Now w/o Justin to help it's gonna be harder to get to the Rossini's.

And omg, Brandon, the idiot who drugged the kids at the party; isn't he the one who is supposed to be working for Rossini; Miguel's friend? Or am I confusing his name with someone else? Although does explain how he got the drug; since we just learned that Rossini has it.

Anyway, awesome, awesome chapter, as always! I look forward to more! :) Sniff, sniff.

Well, that is a terrifying rape drug....

Oh No! Poor Justin....and Raoul is as sick as ever. I wonder if Alex saw that Raoul did it. Either way, I'm sad, but I did see it coming. And now Carlos is the target(or will soon be). If they want to kill Raoul, then they should get on with it. Also, the drugs in this chapter are really weird. I wonder if Alex is going to use it for anything.

Sigh. Oh that was bad. I realize this is not one of your first stories (maybe just your second) but you do not lead a chapter with such a prediction. If you really want the wow factor, stop telling us what will happen in the next chapter. I was more annoyed with what Brandon did then I was upset at the death of Justin because I knew it was going to happen. I'm not saying that your writing is bad, but stop telling us what is going to happen. We will find out, and it will be much more emotional and surprising and upsetting when we do. Also, I know this is how the story has been written from the beginning, but the death of Justin was cheapened a little by the changing POVs. You can write just as good of a story using a third person omniscient POV without compromising the integrity and emotion that you gain by using first person. It's also a lot less stressful and confusing on the reader. I realize that is how the story has been since the beginning, but the changing viewpoints during and after Justin's death just cheapened it. if that portion had been written in the third person, it would have been much more compelling, much more REAL, and much more upsetting. Just something for you to think about. Not saying that I'm going to stop reading the story (I am interested in what happens), but you should really stop telling us what is going to happen. It desensitizes the reader and makes the story and twists that much less effective. When you read Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling didn't start off each chapter with "and this is what happens here." It kind of cheapens your story, and makes it seem as though one could go from the prediction in each chapter and know what happens in the story without actually reading it. Just my two cents, but it put me close to not reading your story again.