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July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, like, who is "her"? Good question! What a great chapter! Great job w/the BDSM (is that the right order of the letters?)! I don't know much about it, but I do know about the safe word. Funny, when Rebecca was telling Carlos he was more of a dom, I was thinking he could be a switch hitter. (as far as the bdsm goes) I know Alex would hope he was a switch hitter for other things! lol
Anyway, great job! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Anyway, great job! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey fused; didn't read the chapter yet, but noticed your A/N. I did leave my email in my last review, yes, I will be more than happy to proof your chapters for you. Just email me the next one when you have it completed. LisaT25@msn.com
I can't wait to dig into this chapter! lol
I can't wait to dig into this chapter! lol
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July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing chapter! I love Alex; he is so funny! "What is it, pick on the pimp day?" lol
And OMG, no lube for Claire? No stretching her? To take in that 12 inch piece of man-meat? Hahahah I only have one word to say: OUCH!!!!
And I LOVED the conversation Alaric and Carlos, aka, Alejandro were having during sex; too funny!
I do have a question tho: why on earth did Carlos lube Claire up in her pussy, but not in her ass? Why does he lube up the women? Women have natural lubricants, right?
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter; don't forget to email me! :)
And OMG, no lube for Claire? No stretching her? To take in that 12 inch piece of man-meat? Hahahah I only have one word to say: OUCH!!!!
And I LOVED the conversation Alaric and Carlos, aka, Alejandro were having during sex; too funny!
I do have a question tho: why on earth did Carlos lube Claire up in her pussy, but not in her ass? Why does he lube up the women? Women have natural lubricants, right?
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter; don't forget to email me! :)
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July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this story!
It's really dirty and fun and I can't wait to read more. I'm a bit scared to meet rufus! o__o (But that won't stop me from reading if you update!! :D)
It's really dirty and fun and I can't wait to read more. I'm a bit scared to meet rufus! o__o (But that won't stop me from reading if you update!! :D)
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this is fucking ingenious!!!!!! This story is awesome!!!!! OMG, I can't wait till Alex starts whoring out Carlos, this is too funny!
On the other side, it is really sad to think that these kids have so much to worry about, school, jobs, money, scholarships,etc. I feel really bad for them. They shouldn't be worrying about all this grown-up shit.
Oh, btw: isn't the drinking age 21???? They must be 17 or 18, right? So, how can they go to a bar and drink? Just curious....
I read your A/N and see that this story hasn't been edited. There are quite a few errors. Besides spelling, in the first chapter, when it was Alex's POV, you kept mentioning Miguel and Jessica, Miguel's car, etc. It should have been Carlos, not Miguel.
Anyway, I only got thru ch. 1 so far. I truly love this story. It would be so much better if the spelling were fixed up a bit. I'd be more than willing to look it over and proof it for you. Just email me if you're interested: LisaT25@msn.com.
On the other side, it is really sad to think that these kids have so much to worry about, school, jobs, money, scholarships,etc. I feel really bad for them. They shouldn't be worrying about all this grown-up shit.
Oh, btw: isn't the drinking age 21???? They must be 17 or 18, right? So, how can they go to a bar and drink? Just curious....
I read your A/N and see that this story hasn't been edited. There are quite a few errors. Besides spelling, in the first chapter, when it was Alex's POV, you kept mentioning Miguel and Jessica, Miguel's car, etc. It should have been Carlos, not Miguel.
Anyway, I only got thru ch. 1 so far. I truly love this story. It would be so much better if the spelling were fixed up a bit. I'd be more than willing to look it over and proof it for you. Just email me if you're interested: LisaT25@msn.com.
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great second chapter! Carlos aka Alejandro seems to like being a man-whore! lol I can tell he can't wait until his next "client". lol
I'm looking forward to reading about Rufus; how does he know so much? hahah
Can't wait for your next update; again, if you want me to proof the next chapters, or even these first two, let me know. I won't change anything except correct the spelling and the grammar. You seem to like the word "you're" when you mean "your". :)
I'm looking forward to reading about Rufus; how does he know so much? hahah
Can't wait for your next update; again, if you want me to proof the next chapters, or even these first two, let me know. I won't change anything except correct the spelling and the grammar. You seem to like the word "you're" when you mean "your". :)