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OH yeah the shrub got it. yes, close one though. keep it up.

Another breath taking chapter. I really cant wait to see how this plays out.

Winter x

Omg, devious, devious Alex! And Carlos, the man-whore! hahaha Great chapter! I can't believe they blackmailed Shrub that bitch. I still don't trust her though; I know she'll try to figure out a way out of this blackmail.

And good for Carlos for helping out a good friend! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

oh man, the shrub is back. i think i know what your gonna do and do it. Alex finally came out, hopefully the backlash won't be too bad.

Fuck! Shrub's at it again! Jesus, can't she just leave poor Alex alone! Especially on his first date, to his first gay bar???? I'm proud of him for admitting to his dad he's gay. I'm actually glad that his dad figured it out. It makes it easier for Alex. Now hopefully his dad won't be a homophobic prick.

The scene with Carlos (altho I think he was Alejandro then) and Ruby; priceless! Him seducing the DYFS lady, too funny! And hey, once you get DYFS in your life, you never get rid of them! So he'll have plenty of times to bang Ruby. hehehe

And him not wanting to use the kitchen table ever again, hahahhh, too funny! :)

Great chapter, as always! Can't wait to find out what's gonna go down between Alex and asshole Shrub. :)

This story is awesome!!!! I really hope someone takes care of Shrub! YAY for Alex and Justin! Keep up the work..Can't wait for chapter 13

Alex should go with his heart and not worry about what other people think. They don't have to live his life, he does. And he should live it happy, with whomever he wants.

It was hysterical tho that Carlos and Uncle Rufus figured out Alex's "problem". hahah

And...thank God Carlos won that bet! Now he can show the social worker his family can take care of Erik! :)

Good chapter; I'm looking forward to Alex and Justin's date.

Awww, Justin was so sweet with Alex; I'm glad Alex had a perfect first time also. I don't think Alex has anything to worry about w/Justin just taking off on him. Justin seems to be just as enamored w/Alex as Alex is w/Justin.

And wow, now Carlos has had two three-ways! lol He's getting the hang of having a guy there. lol

Too bad for Jess, tho; I feel bad for her. Here she was, pretty much over stud Carlos, and then Carlos AND Alejandro come along and blow THAT out of the water!

Awesome chapter! I can't wait to find out who won the contest. Oh, I was thinking, instead of screwing Jess, Carlos could have just asked for her panties, like he originally did w/Kate, right? Chris would never know he cheated. lol

Anyway, great job! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

ooohh man, that was HOT !!!!!! keep them coming this is a really great story and i don't say that often. The dynamic is just great.

I love how you write this. I just read the whole thing and I am eager to find out more about Carlos and Alex. You are a great writer, and the way you end each chapter with a cliff hanger it just makes the reader want to continue on. I have to say when I got to the last chapter I didn't want it to end yet. Good job