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Spiderrrrs! Ahaha, wasn't expecting that. I'm ashamed to say that Krowe and I are kinda in the same mindset...though I don't jump into men's laps when I see one. XD Anyways I liked learning more about Varka, wasn't what I was expecting. I think I'll have to go back soon though and reread the first two chapters just to freshen my memory. And I guess Annej was talking about "the bastard" being that guy that Varka went to talk to? I'm forgetting his name at the moment. >_<

Haha, well, nice to see you posting again. I want to put something on this sight too...I just haven't written anything that I want to post yet. Oh, and as for where Red and White came from, yes do tell. :D Talk to you later!

WHOOT! Another chapter Down!! Great chapter!! A Lot has been discovered, i believe, but also....So many more questions!! Great chapter as always!! Please update soon! Krowe is cute^^ Sorta reminds me of myself. If I were a Doctor/Man/Vampier, lol.

wow,this nexis sounds even more delicious then Varka, but a tad bit to freezing cold for my taste buds;)
I wonder what's gonna happen now, a duel?
Whoever wins gets the girl, I mean boy(Annej).

Maybe Krowe and Varka will bat eyelashes at each other and duel with that till one of them caves from lust*laughs*
Sorry, my perviness is getting out of hand.

Even back then, there was something about the kid that stood out. Lucky for him since a child stands no chance against a group of vampires that wanna play with his corpse. So Krowe took Annej to keep themselves from being killed...maybe I'm just weird, but if you're trying to hide from someone then why would you go back to your own clinic? I don't know, just seems like an obvious place to check out. XD

Haha, I like Red better than White.

Hee, it'll be a while before anyone reads my original. Besides needing some serious revamping, I need to type it up! It's still all written out on notebook paper. o_o But I've gotten another idea for a story. It still needs developing but I want to get started on it. Gonna try my hand at a more...fantasy type story. We'll see how it all goes! :D

I'm not a m/m reader, but I wound up clicking on this story and I have to admit i'm glad I did. I've got some suspicions about the connection between Varka and Annej. Have to wait and see if i'm right or not. Good job with this so far, and yay to your friend for bugging you into updating.

Yep^^ I shall keep it a secret! I am good at that. Great job!! I cannot stop thinking about the origin of Varka's name whenever I read it, lol. But Great chapter!! Krowe is in Troubles!!! But I guess he would feel responsible if Annej was killed because he bit him. Red and White are very interesting indeed! Though Red seems to be wanting something from Annej, lol. Again! Great work and great job on this chapter! I know you work really hard, so I bet everyone appreciates it whenever you update your stories. Update soon!!

Lol, yeah I know first chapter is hardly a base to judge the whole story.
Let's see, chapter two...good, really good.I'm reminded(because I always get a mental picture of my own while I'm reading stuffs) of Iason from Ai no kusabi when I read about Varka.Weird, ha?
Anyway twins seem interesting.Krowe vs.Varka sounds iteresting too(perv me is picturing a threesome right about now hehe).And I'm glad you'e taking time to decribe Krowe's clinc and whys and whys not.
All in all, like always I'm waiting to read more.
Much thanks to your friend for pushing you to write this chapter.
I made a really weird but very delicious plum cream+cheese cream cake on a dark bicsuit cake today.
It tastes like a slice of heaven and I guess human blood would taSTE like that to a vampire hehe.
You can have some too...that is if you can taste it;))

Haha, damn, look at you. Getting me into a vampire story with just one chapter. XD I actually read this yesterday but...my review probably would've sucked donkey balls. You always have the coolest dreams. >_< Hehehe, I like how humans are the inferior species (I swear that's going to happen when the fucking aliens come!) I'm not crazy. XP

Yet with everything, Annej is still quite the character. He's fairly educated it seems, he has a name...I'm assuming vampires have long since been the dominate species? Which makes him all the more peculiar. You know, I like how you make the biting a pleasurable experience rather than some brutal messy thing...but I think that may be because I just have some weird trip about biting. But now Krowe is kinda fucked, eh? He did a no no and bit Annej. Bad!

Anyways, I like your original story a lot so far. I've been thinking about dusting off my own piece and doing some major editing to it. I kinda wanna take a break from fanfiction actually...well, at least from the Inuyasha fandom anyways. -shrugs- We'll see though. =)

Why is Annej so similair to his vampire master(looks)?
Could it be that he is not bred for s blood slave but taken from the streets?
Also, what is Krowe going to do with Annej now?

The whole high boots&belts thing reminds me too much on gothic chicks&flicks(as far away from any kind of musculinity as possible) but in a sci-fi setting(like equilibrium) it is possible.
I was annoyed by ROzeline bec ause ehr lies sounded juvenile&robotic(are you fuctional?wtf?)
Also I do not understand how did we jump from an intelligent witty conversation (Annej&Krowe) to his lying down and begging to be taken?
Why would he behav e that way? He thought Krowe was stuoid and silly and shit like that and suddenly he's all"Bite me." but he's not saying it like a man would(meaning fuck off) but like a wantoon whore(take me).

This isn't menat as a flame or a negative review although I admit it might be harsh(depends on how soft/hard hearted you are;)) I'm just pointing out stuffs that I didn't understand, that is I don't understand why you wrote it that way.
Of course I'm looking ofrward to readig more about Krowe's clinic.
But when you said that this will be original and not to be weirded out I thought you developed a new way to feed or somehing.
you're story is like Daybrakers movie universe.Not a copy, it's just similair so far.

do i smell a delightfully complicated, long lasting, ménage à trois? i hope i do...