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great story!

Ahhhh!! She/he is gonna get them!! I wonder what that guy is gonna say to Roz....Though I think she can take care of herself, what exactly is Solas wanting or doing?? Is he after Krowe and gang?? He's certainly wondering far off that path if he is messing around where they first started at! or is get trying to gain more information?? Great chapter!! Sorry i did not get to it sooner, I had to finish my sound for animation. It looks good I believe^^ Please update soon!!

" Gay guys Do Exsist!" Hahha, I had to laugh at that. Great chapter! I was really surprised Krowe suggested that they kiss Each Other, might have thought he'd want kisses for himself, though he seems to be enjoying himself quite a bit. And Oh No!! Poor Red! He's gonna get sexed! Well, I don't know really what is gonna happen to him, but yeah. Lol. And this new character, I wonder what part she shall have in this story. Please Update soon!! Wonderful chapter as always^^ It was a pleasent surprise!!

What!! Nooooo!!! * Hands over my mouth* Thats exactly what I did when I read the last line. Great chapter!! It certainly is getting heated up all over the place!! Is it Valeifacent who is going to try and kill Varka and Annej? How the hell does she even know about Annej? Unless Annej is not a secret, and whatever it is that makes him valued? Or is Valeifacent some sort of future teller or whatever?? And I wonder where that little girl will end up.Please update soon!!! This has been great to read on my b-day^^ Certainly starts it out quite nicely^^

Is it bad that I can't wait to see more of evil Valeficent? XD She's brutal! She just...ate Maris and her husband, that's so gross! I found that whole scene from Seffera leaving to Valeficent really interesting. Red came back. I really like his personality, I kinda wish I had more of his traits. I see small bits of myself in him, but he's just a bad ass. Haha, of all the things to change Varka (so to speak) I'm sort of surprised that it was that baby creature. Looks like its real mama is back though. Hehe, now Varka has some competition. Or maybe you're throwing a curve ball and it's not the thing's mother after all. And of course, I'm glad you did decide to write out the Najja/Nexis scene. XD

Something else about your story: you have a lot of different scenes with different characters doing their own things, and it works quite nicely. Like in my own stories I don't really do that, but I like it here. I guess because you're developing a bunch of them and they're all really cool in their own ways. I don't know, just wanted to point that out. Oh, and awesome that you're going to start updating your IY fics again. ;D At least for me, after taking a long break from the fandom and then coming back, they're actually kinda fun to write for again.

AMAZING,HOT,SUSPENSEFUL,SURPRISING,FUNNY,EVIL DOING,JUST PLAIN AWESOME SAUSE!! That is this chapter!! Great job!! Cannot wait for the next chapter next week!! You and your cliff hangers, lol^^ Update soon!!

haha! poor Varka! man Krowe is going to piss himself laughing!!! I know i almost did, Varka makes a good 'Mama'

Chapter 14. it would be wicked awesome to see a fanart of the baby makabre clutching onto Varka in that tree. XD awesome work and i can't wait to read more!

Hhahahahahahah!! The ending is sooo cute!! And hot damn I didn't expect Najja and Nexis to be getting it on!! Really, I didn't, but now I understand why Najja wouldn't want the two to kill each other. Great chapter I must say^^ I just kept laughing, I'll have to draw Varka the Mama now^^! Please update soon!!

Awwwww!!!!! The Makabre views Varka as its mother! Cute!!!!!!